Jaundiced

after the storm
azalea perfume
yellows the lawn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 4, 2008 at 3:29 PM
nive simple powerful punch, take care D-nyce
Jordan Avatar
September 4, 2008 at 6:31 AM
Very interesting poem Brian - Once again words of truth - God Bless
Winter Avatar
September 4, 2008 at 5:33 AM
Pretty visual and I can sense the atmosphere. Love, Shar
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September 4, 2008 at 3:32 AM
A beautiful display. A lovely haiku, all my best, Kristin
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