Jasmine's Memories

She lays still upon the night in nakedness
Her body unclothed of scent
She strewn them upon night wind's breast
I gather from the firmanent  
The delicious sweetness with my nose
Her soft lips beckon, I touch them
Tender with the honey her tongue expose
The stars all blink before her diadem

O but summer turns to fall, and blues come
Like Winter making wreaths of wrinkled grass
The sugarcane overpowers my heart with rum
Odor dripping from the night's dark flask,
But still remember my jasmines white as moon
And soft, so soft her tender blooms
In that tenderness her vanity and my own ruin
Her fragrance calls me when it glooms.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week L'nass. Love, Carol
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February 14, 2011 at 5:36 PM
Congrats L'Nass on being featured with "Jasmine's Memories". Vince
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February 13, 2011 at 8:50 PM
Congrats L'Nass on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all today with luv....
Thomer Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 9:26 AM
your way with painting these words is amazing, you entrance the reader, they follow you and the magic of your words. I loved the beginning of the second stanza, it was so familiar to my heart, and so profound. excellent work, one for the faves, thank you. --Madison
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June 29, 2010 at 1:01 PM
Smile ~ Wow, you have turned into quite an erotic writer--perhaps, this is your new calling? Smile, hello my dear old beautiful and gifted friend L'nass--I hope that life has been treating you so brightly--I was on my way to the yellow brick road and saw your precious name and wanted to say hello! This is "A Beautiful Poem!!!" ~ Until we meet again, "My Love to You & Yours," John!:) ~
Richards Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 12:57 PM
You have been missed my friend....you who writes with beauty as this....one more amazing piece that takes me away! Lovely lovely work! ~ Carrie
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