jasmine jingle hiku

snow-white sepals s w i r l g l i d i n g past emerald orbs ~ a jasmine j i n g l e

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Anne Winter

Date: 5/10/2025 2:31:00 AM

Dear IE, excellent haiku, it's like I can smell the jasmines, loved it! And I also love your poems! Best, Anne

Ink Empress
Date: 5/10/2025 8:36:00 AM

That means alot coming from you talented soul! Thank you so very much for visiting my page and for leaving your heartfelt comment. Grateful truly

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/10/2025 1:10:00 AM

Lovely haiku. For Brian? I love jasmine. Smells so lovely in spring.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/10/2025 8:39:00 AM

Thank you yes was for brian. Appreciate always your support dear victor

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/9/2025 2:49:00 PM

IE, nice poetry in motion. This brings jasmine to life. The title adds a bit of imaginary music too. Quite a lovely concert. Have a great day and thank-you for making me smile today.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/10/2025 8:59:00 AM

Lol i didnt try at all i am glad you smiled and was spreading light on my poems too , thank you so very much dear duke for all your thoughtful comments! Im truly grateful

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 5/9/2025 10:43:00 AM

Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in Brian`s poetry contest with a colourful flowery write. Wish you a splendid day and forthcoming weekend.

Ink Empress
Date: 5/10/2025 9:11:00 AM

I love to be flowery yes, thank you dear poet, I appreciate always your kindness

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/8/2025 8:08:00 PM

Excellent haiku, dearest Ink, it delves into the wonders of nature, with an emphasis on the ethereal descriptions of plants and flowers. It shows the beautiful harmony of shapes and colors, painting a tranquil and magical jasmine forest. The grace and serenity of nature are stressed by the topic, which relies on the peaceful coexistence of many elements. Best wishes and magnificent waves sent your way

Ink Empress
Date: 5/10/2025 9:11:00 AM

Thank you dr sotto for your thoughtful detailed and generous response! I am forever grateful truly