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jasmine jingle hiku

snow-white sepals s w i r l 
g   l
    i   d 
      i 
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       g     past  emerald orbs ~ 
a jasmine j i 
                 n
                g l e

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Anne Winter

May 10, 2025 at 2:31 AM

Dear IE, excellent haiku, it's like I can smell the jasmines, loved it! And I also love your poems! Best, Anne

Ink Empress

May 10, 2025 at 8:36 AM

That means alot coming from you talented soul! Thank you so very much for visiting my page and for leaving your heartfelt comment. Grateful truly

Victor Buhagiar

May 10, 2025 at 1:10 AM

Lovely haiku. For Brian? I love jasmine. Smells so lovely in spring.

Ink Empress

May 10, 2025 at 8:39 AM

Thank you yes was for brian. Appreciate always your support dear victor

Duke Beaufort

May 9, 2025 at 2:49 PM

IE, nice poetry in motion. This brings jasmine to life. The title adds a bit of imaginary music too. Quite a lovely concert. Have a great day and thank-you for making me smile today.

Ink Empress

May 10, 2025 at 8:59 AM

Lol i didnt try at all i am glad you smiled and was spreading light on my poems too , thank you so very much dear duke for all your thoughtful comments! Im truly grateful

Krishnanand Guptar

May 9, 2025 at 10:43 AM

Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in Brian`s poetry contest with a colourful flowery write. Wish you a splendid day and forthcoming weekend.

Ink Empress

May 10, 2025 at 9:11 AM

I love to be flowery yes, thank you dear poet, I appreciate always your kindness

Sotto Poet

May 8, 2025 at 8:08 PM

Excellent haiku, dearest Ink, it delves into the wonders of nature, with an emphasis on the ethereal descriptions of plants and flowers. It shows the beautiful harmony of shapes and colors, painting a tranquil and magical jasmine forest. The grace and serenity of nature are stressed by the topic, which relies on the peaceful coexistence of many elements. Best wishes and magnificent waves sent your way

Ink Empress

May 10, 2025 at 9:11 AM

Thank you dr sotto for your thoughtful detailed and generous response! I am forever grateful truly