Jasmine

Jasmine ( Pleiades ) Jam packed with sweet pollen Jostling with rival plants, Jocular in Summer January bare though Jazzy and beautiful, Jocose nasal senses Joyous wonderful plant.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/22/2017 6:51:00 PM

Roy you describe the Jasmine very well. It is a beautiful plant. Have a Happy thanks giving Day my friend.

Roy Pett
Date: 11/23/2017 1:35:00 AM

Thank you so much Darlene for your very kind comment, wishing you a happy thanksgiving day too my friend. :))

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/18/2017 6:51:00 PM

Roy, your beautiful words portray the luscious Jasmine in a wonderful way. I love the 'J' words to start each sentence. A very delightful poem my friend! Enjoyed!

Roy Pett
Date: 11/19/2017 4:14:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Susan, the fragrance of Jasmine is a joy to the senses, I find the constraints of the Pleiades form interesting especially with difficult letters, thanks again your support and encouragement is so welcome. :))

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 11/17/2017 4:24:00 PM

Mmm, I love the scent of jasmine.

Roy Pett
Date: 11/17/2017 4:51:00 PM

Thank you Elizabeth, one of my favourite fragrances. :))

Jan Allison

Date: 11/17/2017 1:14:00 PM

It's a beautiful flower and you have written such a lovely poem., I do enjoy writing this form too Roy:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 11/17/2017 2:39:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I agree Jasmine is a beautiful flower, I do get pleasure from writing this form too, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/17/2017 12:24:00 PM

It is a joyful flower--like the way managed to start each line with a J! Original and creative!

Roy Pett
Date: 11/17/2017 2:34:00 PM

Thank you very much Vijay you are very kind, thanks for your support much appreciated. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2017 12:14:00 PM

- Beautiful flower ... beautiful fragrance ... and a beautiful poem, Roy - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett
Date: 11/17/2017 2:32:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise for your very kind comment and best wishes really appreciated, wishing you and yours a lovely weekend. :))

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/17/2017 11:02:00 AM

Beautiful. Very well written Roy! :)

Roy Pett
Date: 11/17/2017 11:10:00 AM

Thank you so much you are very kind, I agree Jasmine is beautiful and I love its fragrance. :))