Jasmine

Jasmine ( Pleiades )

Jam packed with sweet pollen 
Jostling with rival plants,
Jocular in Summer
January bare though 
Jazzy and beautiful, 
Jocose nasal senses
Joyous wonderful plant.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/22/2017 6:51:00 PM

Roy you describe the Jasmine very well. It is a beautiful plant. Have a Happy thanks giving Day my friend.

Roy Pett
Date: 11/23/2017 1:35:00 AM

Thank you so much Darlene for your very kind comment, wishing you a happy thanksgiving day too my friend. :))

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/18/2017 6:51:00 PM

Roy, your beautiful words portray the luscious Jasmine in a wonderful way. I love the 'J' words to start each sentence. A very delightful poem my friend! Enjoyed!

Roy Pett
Date: 11/19/2017 4:14:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Susan, the fragrance of Jasmine is a joy to the senses, I find the constraints of the Pleiades form interesting especially with difficult letters, thanks again your support and encouragement is so welcome. :))

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 11/17/2017 4:24:00 PM

Mmm, I love the scent of jasmine.

Roy Pett
Date: 11/17/2017 4:51:00 PM

Thank you Elizabeth, one of my favourite fragrances. :))

Jan Allison

Date: 11/17/2017 1:14:00 PM

It's a beautiful flower and you have written such a lovely poem., I do enjoy writing this form too Roy:-) hugs jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 11/17/2017 2:39:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I agree Jasmine is a beautiful flower, I do get pleasure from writing this form too, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))