Jasmine

Jasmine at my window Joy of luscious perfume Jhelum waves are crazy Joyous airy whisper Jovial time we share Jamaica Rum in breeze Jingle will bells all night ____________________________________________________ 05/03/2017::Note: Jhelum is a famous river in Kashmir

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/11/2017 6:48:00 PM

Congrats on win, but for me, I loved the second to last line!!! Cheers!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/11/2017 7:45:00 PM

I agree ... Thank you ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2017 2:12:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/8/2017 7:44:00 AM

Thank you ...

Darren White

Date: 3/7/2017 11:21:00 PM

Beautiful Probir, absolutely beautiful. Congratulations :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/7/2017 11:39:00 PM

Thank you, Darren

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/7/2017 9:22:00 PM

Probir, I could almost smell the jasmine while I read your Pleiades! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/7/2017 11:47:00 PM

And what about listening to the air's joyous whisper? ... anyway, if you really can smell, the credit goes to you because it is very plain that had there been no contest put up from your end, this jasmine would never have been in existence ... Of course, better ones would have been, but not this one ... profound thanks, Kim ...

Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2017 8:02:00 PM

Nicely done congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/7/2017 11:48:00 PM

Thank you, Eve ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/5/2017 1:58:00 PM

Justifiable verse for such a beautiful flower of which I love the perfume on my rooftop garden dear, Probir! Good luck and a 7!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/5/2017 9:46:00 PM

Thank you ... In your rooftop then, you are emperor ...

Jan Allison

Date: 3/5/2017 1:02:00 PM

D delight to the senses Probir:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/5/2017 9:47:00 PM

Thank you, Jan ...

Janis Thompson

Date: 3/5/2017 11:40:00 AM

Lovely pleiades. GL in the contest. Looks like a winner yo me.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/5/2017 9:48:00 PM

Thank you, Janis ...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/5/2017 10:28:00 AM

you bloom with this one, probir.. really fine!..huggs

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/5/2017 11:22:00 AM

Thank you, nette ...

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/5/2017 8:08:00 AM

Very nice Probir :) Good luck in the contest.

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/5/2017 11:24:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi ...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/5/2017 7:31:00 AM

A 7, Probir--beautiful! Janice

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/5/2017 11:24:00 AM

Thank you, Janice ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2017 5:08:00 AM

- My first attempt was: "Jasmine" ... but I threw it :) - Yours became a beautiful pleiades, Probir :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/5/2017 6:32:00 AM

Thank you ...