Jasmine

Jasmine at my window

Joy of luscious perfume

Jhelum waves are crazy

Joyous airy whisper

Jovial time we share

Jamaica Rum in breeze

Jingle will bells all night
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05/03/2017::Note: Jhelum is a famous river in Kashmir

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Arthur Vaso

March 11, 2017 at 6:48 PM

Congrats on win, but for me, I loved the second to last line!!! Cheers!

Probir Gupta

March 11, 2017 at 7:45 PM

I agree ... Thank you ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 8, 2017 at 2:12 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

March 8, 2017 at 7:44 AM

Thank you ...

Darren White

March 7, 2017 at 11:21 PM

Beautiful Probir, absolutely beautiful. Congratulations :)

Probir Gupta

March 7, 2017 at 11:39 PM

Thank you, Darren

Kim Merryman

March 7, 2017 at 9:22 PM

Probir, I could almost smell the jasmine while I read your Pleiades! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Probir Gupta

March 7, 2017 at 11:47 PM

And what about listening to the air's joyous whisper? ... anyway, if you really can smell, the credit goes to you because it is very plain that had there been no contest put up from your end, this jasmine would never have been in existence ... Of course, better ones would have been, but not this one ... profound thanks, Kim ...

Eve Roper

March 7, 2017 at 8:02 PM

Nicely done congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Probir Gupta

March 7, 2017 at 11:48 PM

Thank you, Eve ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 5, 2017 at 1:58 PM

Justifiable verse for such a beautiful flower of which I love the perfume on my rooftop garden dear, Probir! Good luck and a 7!

Probir Gupta

March 5, 2017 at 9:46 PM

Thank you ... In your rooftop then, you are emperor ...

Jan Allison

March 5, 2017 at 1:02 PM

D delight to the senses Probir:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta

March 5, 2017 at 9:47 PM

Thank you, Jan ...

Janis Medders Tobechi

March 5, 2017 at 11:40 AM

Lovely pleiades. GL in the contest. Looks like a winner yo me.

Probir Gupta

March 5, 2017 at 9:48 PM

Thank you, Janis ...

Nette Onclaud

March 5, 2017 at 10:28 AM

you bloom with this one, probir.. really fine!..huggs

Probir Gupta

March 5, 2017 at 11:22 AM

Thank you, nette ...

Heidi Sands

March 5, 2017 at 8:08 AM

Very nice Probir :) Good luck in the contest.

Probir Gupta

March 5, 2017 at 11:24 AM

Thank you, Heidi ...

Janice Canerdy

March 5, 2017 at 7:31 AM

A 7, Probir--beautiful! Janice

Probir Gupta

March 5, 2017 at 11:24 AM

Thank you, Janice ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 5, 2017 at 5:08 AM

- My first attempt was: "Jasmine" ... but I threw it :) - Yours became a beautiful pleiades, Probir :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

March 5, 2017 at 6:32 AM

Thank you ...

Jasmine

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