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Jar of fake hopes

Filling up the unknown eerie, Reason that turns-into weary, Slowly piling up the jar of fake Hopes Seems an open silk thread but truly-many suffocating ropes. A word so blind,that might relax their thirst. Ever wondered?when this jar breaks-a cloudburst. Leaving it empty-accepting what it may... Keeping up the truths-burying all concealed days.

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Date: 3/16/2025 10:39:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem! Thank you for sharing. Have a great day!
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Date: 3/9/2025 12:11:00 PM
Hello Melancholy Coffee, This is a rhyme. You have done it very well. It is nice to meet you. I enjoyed the poem. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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