Jar of fake hopes

Filling up the unknown eerie,
Reason that turns-into weary,
Slowly piling up the jar of fake Hopes
Seems an open silk thread but truly-many suffocating ropes.
A word so blind,that might relax their thirst.
Ever wondered?when this jar breaks-a cloudburst.
Leaving it empty-accepting what it may...
Keeping up the truths-burying all concealed days.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Shines Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 10:39 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem! Thank you for sharing. Have a great day!
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 9, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Hello Melancholy Coffee, This is a rhyme. You have done it very well. It is nice to meet you. I enjoyed the poem. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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