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Jar

I stand on a mountain top I watch the world from afar I see the pain in you rising Smothering a once bright star I wish I could harness your tears I would put them in a glass jar The pain would be trapped in this jar forever It would never get free to find you where you are Then you would be able to find your happiness and let love flow in Just keep your heart ajar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/23/2009 4:35:00 AM
Simple, short and nice.
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Date: 7/22/2009 8:05:00 PM
very original! james! I love poems that show new ways of thinking! jim
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Date: 7/22/2009 7:00:00 PM
wow!! i really like this one!! it is a very passionate and its just a lovely poem! Great Write!! i love it!! keep em coming James!! Ciara=)
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