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January Trees

Branches sway in the dark cold breeze
Moving like they were in a freeze
Colorful they once were
Their beauty puts me on my knees
Never did they want to displease
Dormant they are for sure

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Black Eyed Susan's "Your favorite tail rhyme, past or present" contest

11/15/2012

Copyright © Russell Sivey | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/7/2012 11:07:00 AM Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Russell. Love Carol Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/7/2012 9:36:00 AM Congrats on your winning work.Very descriptive scene.It is a sad time for the stark naked trees..Sara Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/4/2012 5:02:00 PM Russell, congratulations, with your wonderful poem..pd Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 12/4/2012 1:43:00 PM Congratulations Russell I see you are in the winners circle again and well deserved xx Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/4/2012 9:41:00 AM congrats Russell luv on a splendid write and win .. perfect tail-rhyme my friend .. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2012 8:34:00 AM Well done Russell, I enjoyed this poem, congrats. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 12/4/2012 7:37:00 AM Very nice Tail rhyme here Russell!Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/16/2012 11:35:00 PM This is very nice, Russell. A good theme to use too. Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 11/16/2012 12:21:00 PM I know I haven't been around much lately been very busy, I miss reading your poems, they are always so full of emotion.. Nicely done my friend hope to chat soon. hugs cory Login to Reply

Toquyen Harrell Date: 11/16/2012 10:27:00 AM Beautiful, Russell. I like "never did they want to displease". So aim to please. The nature of our universe! Enjoyed. Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 11/16/2012 9:53:00 AM A brilliant write Rusty,Reminds me of the silent sentinals that wait to get dressed. A wonderful entry for the contes with all my best wishes! Love, Lizzie Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/16/2012 9:17:00 AM BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY HERE!!Love it! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/16/2012 7:55:00 AM Well done Russel, I will have to try out this style. Login to Reply Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/16/2012 10:29:00 AM surprisingly I tried this style before and forgot.

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/16/2012 6:34:00 AM Great work that you have entered into the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck ...Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/16/2012 12:55:00 AM fascinating imagery and a great entry for Susan .. most creative theme ..we have severe damage to our oak and mimosa trees but think by Spring they will flourish with TLC .. a stupendous write my friend .. such a joy to read beautiful heartfelt poetry from u luv .. Login to Reply