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January Perceptions

immoral north winds locking jaws on shriveled souls- sun starved perdition becharmed arctic breeze winter’s kiss exalting hearts- moon drenched nirvana

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Saba Khan

Date: 6/8/2014 11:49:00 PM

Congratulations :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 5:43:00 PM

Congratulations, Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2014 10:42:00 AM

I find your set to be utterly gorgeous. Would have put it much higher on the list!!! Congrats on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2014 9:43:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, david

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 8:36:00 AM

DAVID, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT

Roy Jerden

Date: 5/22/2014 3:49:00 PM

Nice contrasts, David. Good luck!

Joseph May

Date: 5/21/2014 6:19:00 PM

Very nicely penned....I was looking for a gem with a blue color and I came across the blue gem which seemed perfect ....

Paul Callus

Date: 5/17/2014 8:15:00 AM

Love both haiku, David; two sides of the coin. gl in contest. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 6/8/2014 2:03:00 PM

...back again...this time with congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2014 11:29:00 PM

wow, from perditioin to nirvana in just a blink. I really LIKES this. Hope it scores high for ya.