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January Perceptions

immoral north winds 
locking jaws on shriveled souls-
sun starved perdition 

becharmed arctic breeze
winter’s kiss exalting hearts-
moon drenched nirvana

Copyright © David Mohn | Year Posted 2014

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June 8, 2014 at 11:49 PM

Congratulations :)

Poet Destroyer A

June 8, 2014 at 5:43 PM

Congratulations, Linda

Andrea Dietrich

June 8, 2014 at 10:42 AM

I find your set to be utterly gorgeous. Would have put it much higher on the list!!! Congrats on your win.

June 8, 2014 at 9:43 AM

Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, david

June 8, 2014 at 8:36 AM

DAVID, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT

May 22, 2014 at 3:49 PM

Nice contrasts, David. Good luck!

May 21, 2014 at 6:19 PM

Very nicely penned....I was looking for a gem with a blue color and I came across the blue gem which seemed perfect ....

May 17, 2014 at 8:15 AM

Love both haiku, David; two sides of the coin. gl in contest. // paul

June 8, 2014 at 2:03 PM

...back again...this time with congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

May 16, 2014 at 11:29 PM

wow, from perditioin to nirvana in just a blink. I really LIKES this. Hope it scores high for ya.

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