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january morn heat pump continuously hums.... golden orb rises Henry was told to take a nice bath He knew a cold room would freeze his a__ So, he built a word fire Filled his lover with desire Slipped outside with his clothes and white spathe
another cold sunrise, calla lily with white spathe buried

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Date: 3/16/2022 7:42:00 PM
Dear Sara, sorry it took so long to comment on this delightful poem. You did a great job combining these forms. The whole thing came together so nice, but the limerick, well, it made me LOL. My belated Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings...Charlie
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/18/2022 4:28:00 AM
Why, thank you Charlie for dropping by and commenting on my work. I am honored to have placed in your contest. Sara
Date: 3/14/2022 10:56:00 PM
A delightful poem painting smiles on my face. Thanks for sharing my dear Sara. Congratulations on your win too! Blessings!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/15/2022 5:53:00 AM
Len, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. I appreciate you letting me know it placed. Sara
Date: 3/11/2022 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A fun/creative write. So Cute. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 3/11/2022 4:14:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. I hope this has been a good day for you as well. Sara
Date: 3/11/2022 5:02:00 AM
Interesting and hilarious. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/11/2022 4:12:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by with congrats and I am glad you enjoyed the humor, Alex. Your visit was encouraging. Sara
Date: 1/29/2022 10:24:00 AM
Yours bears a poetess pensiveness and assonance, Sara, as mines pale in every way, my friend! Best to you, Aloha!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/29/2022 2:00:00 PM
William, Your kind review is supportive. Thank you for dropping by. Sara
Date: 1/27/2022 10:29:00 AM
Most creative Panagiotab
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/28/2022 7:09:00 AM
Why thank you!!! I appreciate the nice review. Sara
Date: 1/24/2022 8:00:00 PM
On a cold January morn, it is so heartening to see the 'golden orb' rising ! I liked the first and the last scenes, Sara ! Love the Calla lilies!
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Date: 1/25/2022 3:13:00 AM
I am glad you liked some of the lines. Right now, the calla lilies are buried under the cold earth but soon they will slowly peek out to present themselves to another year. Thanks for the visit. Sara
Date: 1/23/2022 3:03:00 PM
Lovely Sara. I really like this. Well done. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/24/2022 4:55:00 AM
Judy, I am delighted that you like this one. Your visits are always encouraging. Sara
Date: 1/23/2022 8:19:00 AM
You have great imagination. Would flowers increase te heat in our homes. I suffer from cold too much.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2022 8:53:00 AM
No, Victor, I don't think flowers in our homes would help with increasing the heat, but they help the air inside be of better quality. They deciduous trees and shrubs around will let sunlight in during the winter and shade it during the summer. A row of windows to let the sunlight in during the day helps to bring in heat but can also let in cold at night unless insulated panes plus maybe insulated drapes to close at night and in summer to block out the heat. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara
Date: 1/23/2022 6:47:00 AM
What a wonderful and vibrant piece of art, Sarah. Your depiction has brought the flower to life and helped make the cold even more bearable. Best regards
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2022 8:45:00 AM
Lasaad, Your comment has brightened my day. It has lightened my load. Sara
Date: 1/23/2022 4:12:00 AM
Your description has blossomed the lily, and made winter that much warmer, Thank you for your creative words today Sara, God bless you :)
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Date: 1/23/2022 6:15:00 AM
Thank you, Mystic for the kind review of my work. I appreciate the visit. Sara