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January Morn Hlm

january morn
heat pump continuously hums....
golden orb rises

Henry was told to take a nice bath  
He knew a cold room would freeze his a__
So, he built a word fire
Filled his lover with desire
Slipped outside with his clothes and white spathe  


another cold sunrise, 
                           calla lily with white spathe buried

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2022

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Charles Messina Date: 3/16/2022 7:42:00 PM Dear Sara, sorry it took so long to comment on this delightful poem. You did a great job combining these forms. The whole thing came together so nice, but the limerick, well, it made me LOL. My belated Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings...Charlie Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 3/18/2022 4:28:00 AM Why, thank you Charlie for dropping by and commenting on my work. I am honored to have placed in your contest. Sara

Len Gasun Date: 3/14/2022 10:56:00 PM A delightful poem painting smiles on my face. Thanks for sharing my dear Sara. Congratulations on your win too! Blessings! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 3/15/2022 5:53:00 AM Len, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. I appreciate you letting me know it placed. Sara

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/11/2022 12:33:00 PM Congratulations on your win. A fun/creative write. So Cute. Have a blessed day................. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 3/11/2022 4:14:00 PM Thank you, Paula. I hope this has been a good day for you as well. Sara

Christuraj Alex Date: 3/11/2022 5:02:00 AM Interesting and hilarious. Beautifully written. Congratulations! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 3/11/2022 4:12:00 PM Thank you for stopping by with congrats and I am glad you enjoyed the humor, Alex. Your visit was encouraging. Sara

Hilo Poet Date: 1/29/2022 10:24:00 AM Yours bears a poetess pensiveness and assonance, Sara, as mines pale in every way, my friend! Best to you, Aloha! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/29/2022 2:00:00 PM William, Your kind review is supportive. Thank you for dropping by. Sara

Panagiota Romios Date: 1/27/2022 10:29:00 AM Most creative Panagiotab Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/28/2022 7:09:00 AM Why thank you!!! I appreciate the nice review. Sara

Valsa George Date: 1/24/2022 8:00:00 PM On a cold January morn, it is so heartening to see the 'golden orb' rising ! I liked the first and the last scenes, Sara ! Love the Calla lilies! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/25/2022 3:13:00 AM I am glad you liked some of the lines. Right now, the calla lilies are buried under the cold earth but soon they will slowly peek out to present themselves to another year. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Judy Ball Date: 1/23/2022 3:03:00 PM Lovely Sara. I really like this. Well done. God Bless, JB Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/24/2022 4:55:00 AM Judy, I am delighted that you like this one. Your visits are always encouraging. Sara

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/23/2022 8:19:00 AM You have great imagination. Would flowers increase te heat in our homes. I suffer from cold too much. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/23/2022 8:53:00 AM No, Victor, I don't think flowers in our homes would help with increasing the heat, but they help the air inside be of better quality. They deciduous trees and shrubs around will let sunlight in during the winter and shade it during the summer. A row of windows to let the sunlight in during the day helps to bring in heat but can also let in cold at night unless insulated panes plus maybe insulated drapes to close at night and in summer to block out the heat. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara

Sotto Poet Date: 1/23/2022 6:47:00 AM What a wonderful and vibrant piece of art, Sarah. Your depiction has brought the flower to life and helped make the cold even more bearable. Best regards Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/23/2022 8:45:00 AM Lasaad, Your comment has brightened my day. It has lightened my load. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/23/2022 4:12:00 AM Your description has blossomed the lily, and made winter that much warmer, Thank you for your creative words today Sara, God bless you :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 1/23/2022 6:15:00 AM Thank you, Mystic for the kind review of my work. I appreciate the visit. Sara