January Haiku

a lot scribbled on
last page of past diary
next one hardcover


January wind
Dodging electric wires web…
Kite sprang in to sky
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Sietesantos Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 4:27 PM
Hi Neelam, this is an excellent write. Congratulations on your win!
Khan Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 11:49 PM
Congratulations :)
Chutani Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 9:48 PM
well written Haiku. Congrats Neelam. Mohan
A   Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 5:42 PM
Lovely win....Linda
Callus Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 2:06 PM
A lovely pair of haiku, Neelam! Hard to choose between the two, so I put them on even par! Congrats on your win. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 10:45 AM
Amazing haiku. That second one I believe is my favorite one yet!! Congrats for your win.
Mehta Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 9:45 AM
Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Neelam
A  Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:36 AM
NEELAM :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT
Thajudeen Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 4:52 AM
Enjoyed.
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