JANUARY DAWN

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frostbite dawn exhales~
the sun, a pale pill swallowed
by shivering streets

12th gradejanuarymorningwinterhaiku

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Line Gauthier

February 7, 2026 at 7:15 AM

Brrr ~ I am feeling the chill

Paige Hind

January 26, 2026 at 12:57 PM

Wow. Amazing haiku <3

sara Etgen-Baker

January 26, 2026 at 5:47 PM

thanks for your complimentary words

Sam Kauffman

January 26, 2026 at 11:48 AM

Sara, this is a WOW! What wonderful words with impact - "frostbite," "pale pill," "shivering streets!" Okay, you get the crown! Blessings and warm hugs!

sara Etgen-Baker

January 26, 2026 at 5:49 PM

awww, thanks for your comments and for sharing your crown...means a lot to me....enjoy your evening, hugs, sara