Janie
When i look at you,
I see a deep sadness
within
A sadness that a person
of mere 15 years
should not yet experience
it seems ke you're battling a fight... a war
you canot win
My advice t you my friend,
let all the little, trivial, meanfulless things go;
as to not clutter your youthful thoughts & you wll see that
life is really actually quite splendid and worth living...
by growing and learning front all you were taught.
Copyright © Jake Brown | Year Posted 2009
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