Joseph May Poet Verse

Jaguar

Jet black is the night as
 Jungle feline of stealth
 Jumps on its hapless prey
 Jaws able to crush bones
 Juicy reptile swimming
 Jaguar jumps in water
 Jostling with a caiman
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 3/4/17

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Freddie Robinson Jr. March 21, 2017 at 3:35 AM A fine piece of poetic tapestry, Joseph. Vivid imagery ... jaguar jostling w/a caiman/alligator. Provocative mental picture. You are really good w/word pictures. Fine poetry. Love and best wishes.

Charlie Smith March 11, 2017 at 9:32 AM Congratulations Joseph, a most deserving win...

John Michaels March 11, 2017 at 5:01 AM Some great imagery here - captures the mysticism and power of the elegant obsidian feline!! Congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus March 8, 2017 at 3:47 PM I am pleased to be back with congratulations, Joseph; I had no doubt this was a winner...and a high flying one, too! Regards // paul

Jan Allison March 8, 2017 at 11:22 AM Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:51 AM Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...

Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2017 at 2:08 AM - Congratulations on your win, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White March 7, 2017 at 11:12 PM Wow, this is such a great winner! Congratulations :)

Janice Canerdy March 7, 2017 at 9:04 PM A 7 for your great winning Pleiades, Joseph! Janice

Cheryl Hoffman March 7, 2017 at 8:58 PM Congrats on a fine pleiade poem win Joseph!~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2017 at 8:27 PM Back for congrats!

Deborah Burch March 7, 2017 at 8:19 PM Congratulations Joe!!:) big Hugggs deb

Janis Medders Tobechi March 7, 2017 at 8:03 PM Vivid descriptions. The beast is after everything tonight. Great j pleiades. Congratulations on top ranking.

Sushma A. Singh March 7, 2017 at 7:48 PM Vivid and engrossing! Congrats on top win!

Eve Roper March 7, 2017 at 7:39 PM Awesome, Joseph, congratulations on your win! ~*

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2017 at 5:35 PM Congratulations, Joseph. Extending it really worked great for you!!! Top dog!

Agnes Krampe March 7, 2017 at 5:26 PM Great description - congrats on your win, Joseph.

Laura Leiser March 7, 2017 at 4:56 PM Wonderful descriptive jaguar poem, Joseph! Many Congrats on your win :)

Kim Merryman March 7, 2017 at 4:44 PM An excellent write with smooth flowing lines and vivid imagery! Congrats on your 1st place win, Joseph, with this stunning entry! Blessings! Kim Joseph May March 7, 2017 at 8:56 PM Thank you so much for the top honors Kim..I'm over the moon...Hugs

Ravi Sathasivam March 6, 2017 at 2:54 AM Excellent write and a good subject for this pleiades. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Andrea Dietrich March 5, 2017 at 10:22 PM wow, one of the best I have seen for extending the sentence, Joseph. AWesome.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 5, 2017 at 10:45 AM Wow, Joseph! I love the action and vivid imagery...an excellent write with 'J'! Hugs, Rhonda

Paul Callus March 5, 2017 at 5:20 AM You chose a very good topic for this Pleiades, Joseph, and the poem itself is very well executed. I see a winner! // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 4:06 AM - A great pleiades, Joseph - (Jaguar .. me too :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Judy Ball March 4, 2017 at 3:49 PM WoW! Never knew a Jaguar would jump into the water after a caiman. Excellent piece. Great description. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB

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