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Jaguar

Jet black is the night as
 Jungle feline of stealth
 Jumps on its hapless prey
 Jaws able to crush bones
 Juicy reptile swimming
 Jaguar jumps in water
 Jostling with a caiman
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 3/4/17

Copyright © Joseph May | Year Posted 2017

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Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 3/21/2017 3:35:00 AM A fine piece of poetic tapestry, Joseph. Vivid imagery ... jaguar jostling w/a caiman/alligator. Provocative mental picture. You are really good w/word pictures. Fine poetry. Love and best wishes. Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 3/11/2017 9:32:00 AM Congratulations Joseph, a most deserving win... Login to Reply

John Michaels Date: 3/11/2017 5:01:00 AM Some great imagery here - captures the mysticism and power of the elegant obsidian feline!! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 3/8/2017 3:47:00 PM I am pleased to be back with congratulations, Joseph; I had no doubt this was a winner...and a high flying one, too! Regards // paul Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 3/8/2017 11:22:00 AM Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 3/8/2017 6:51:00 AM Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share... Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/8/2017 2:08:00 AM - Congratulations on your win, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 3/7/2017 11:12:00 PM Wow, this is such a great winner! Congratulations :) Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 3/7/2017 9:04:00 PM A 7 for your great winning Pleiades, Joseph! Janice Login to Reply

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/7/2017 8:58:00 PM Congrats on a fine pleiade poem win Joseph!~Che :) Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/7/2017 8:27:00 PM Back for congrats! Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 3/7/2017 8:19:00 PM Congratulations Joe!!:) big Hugggs deb Login to Reply

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 3/7/2017 8:03:00 PM Vivid descriptions. The beast is after everything tonight. Great j pleiades. Congratulations on top ranking. Login to Reply

Sushma A. Singh Date: 3/7/2017 7:48:00 PM Vivid and engrossing! Congrats on top win! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 3/7/2017 7:39:00 PM Awesome, Joseph, congratulations on your win! ~* Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/7/2017 5:35:00 PM Congratulations, Joseph. Extending it really worked great for you!!! Top dog! Login to Reply

Agnes Krampe Date: 3/7/2017 5:26:00 PM Great description - congrats on your win, Joseph. Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 3/7/2017 4:56:00 PM Wonderful descriptive jaguar poem, Joseph! Many Congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 3/7/2017 4:44:00 PM An excellent write with smooth flowing lines and vivid imagery! Congrats on your 1st place win, Joseph, with this stunning entry! Blessings! Kim Login to Reply Joseph May Date: 3/7/2017 8:56:00 PM Thank you so much for the top honors Kim..I'm over the moon...Hugs

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 3/6/2017 2:54:00 AM Excellent write and a good subject for this pleiades. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/5/2017 10:22:00 PM wow, one of the best I have seen for extending the sentence, Joseph. AWesome. Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/5/2017 10:45:00 AM Wow, Joseph! I love the action and vivid imagery...an excellent write with 'J'! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 3/5/2017 5:20:00 AM You chose a very good topic for this Pleiades, Joseph, and the poem itself is very well executed. I see a winner! // paul Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/5/2017 4:06:00 AM - A great pleiades, Joseph - (Jaguar .. me too :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise : ) Login to Reply

Judy Ball Date: 3/4/2017 3:49:00 PM WoW! Never knew a Jaguar would jump into the water after a caiman. Excellent piece. Great description. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB Login to Reply

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