Jaguar

Jet black is the night as Jungle feline of stealth Jumps on its hapless prey Jaws able to crush bones Juicy reptile swimming Jaguar jumps in water Jostling with a caiman - 3/4/17

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/21/2017 3:35:00 AM

A fine piece of poetic tapestry, Joseph. Vivid imagery ... jaguar jostling w/a caiman/alligator. Provocative mental picture. You are really good w/word pictures. Fine poetry. Love and best wishes.

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/11/2017 9:32:00 AM

Congratulations Joseph, a most deserving win...

John Michaels

Date: 3/11/2017 5:01:00 AM

Some great imagery here - captures the mysticism and power of the elegant obsidian feline!! Congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/8/2017 3:47:00 PM

I am pleased to be back with congratulations, Joseph; I had no doubt this was a winner...and a high flying one, too! Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 3/8/2017 11:22:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama

Date: 3/8/2017 6:51:00 AM

Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2017 2:08:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White

Date: 3/7/2017 11:12:00 PM

Wow, this is such a great winner! Congratulations :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/7/2017 9:04:00 PM

A 7 for your great winning Pleiades, Joseph! Janice

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 3/7/2017 8:58:00 PM

Congrats on a fine pleiade poem win Joseph!~Che :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/7/2017 8:27:00 PM

Back for congrats!

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/7/2017 8:19:00 PM

Congratulations Joe!!:) big Hugggs deb

Janis Thompson

Date: 3/7/2017 8:03:00 PM

Vivid descriptions. The beast is after everything tonight. Great j pleiades. Congratulations on top ranking.

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 3/7/2017 7:48:00 PM

Vivid and engrossing! Congrats on top win!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2017 7:39:00 PM

Awesome, Joseph, congratulations on your win! ~*

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2017 5:35:00 PM

Congratulations, Joseph. Extending it really worked great for you!!! Top dog!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/7/2017 5:26:00 PM

Great description - congrats on your win, Joseph.

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/7/2017 4:56:00 PM

Wonderful descriptive jaguar poem, Joseph! Many Congrats on your win :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/7/2017 4:44:00 PM

An excellent write with smooth flowing lines and vivid imagery! Congrats on your 1st place win, Joseph, with this stunning entry! Blessings! Kim

Joseph May
Date: 3/7/2017 8:56:00 PM

Thank you so much for the top honors Kim..I'm over the moon...Hugs

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/6/2017 2:54:00 AM

Excellent write and a good subject for this pleiades. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2017 10:22:00 PM

wow, one of the best I have seen for extending the sentence, Joseph. AWesome.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/5/2017 10:45:00 AM

Wow, Joseph! I love the action and vivid imagery...an excellent write with 'J'! Hugs, Rhonda

Paul Callus

Date: 3/5/2017 5:20:00 AM

You chose a very good topic for this Pleiades, Joseph, and the poem itself is very well executed. I see a winner! // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2017 4:06:00 AM

- A great pleiades, Joseph - (Jaguar .. me too :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise : )

Judy Ball

Date: 3/4/2017 3:49:00 PM

WoW! Never knew a Jaguar would jump into the water after a caiman. Excellent piece. Great description. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB