Jagged Claws

Stealing light, Day had won, grey clouds, evoke despair: choking a waning sun. A dullness dims the air, as flower blossoms droop; heads bowed as in prayer. Bruised, indigo splotches dapple diminished blues; with dark purple blotches. Flashing within the gloom, lightning intensifies; with a thunderous boom. And its jagged claws scratch the air high in the sky; reaching for drops to snatch. But its strikes are in vain, for electric talons cannot grasp drops of rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hopper Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 11:57 AM
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Pinet Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Thanks so much Anna, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 11:29 PM
Astounding alliteration -"And brindled bruised splotches dapple diminished blues with dark purple blotches." So well done!
Pinet Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Thanks so much Caren, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Sharp Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 12:11 AM
'...its jagged eyes search for drops to snatch...' I love this line. A very dynamic poem throughout, fave.
Pinet Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Thank you so much Lawrence, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Duet Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 10:41 PM
Great poem, Emile...perfectly describes a storm. Love it.
Pinet Avatar
August 12, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Thanks Carole, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Duet Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 10:50 PM
Great poem, Emile...perfectly describes a storm. I especially like the comparison of the lightening and thunder (personification?) to an eagle or falcon etc. FAVED because I love a good storm! lol
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2018 at 9:36 PM
Well done, Emile. I love your last stanza.
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