Chosen Word: Jagged. Written for contest sponsored by Constance La France. 19/10/2023
Bella Luna blemished with jagged face Craters and debris of beauty no trace Midnight sky golden globe rides high On earth we see vision and softly sigh. Luna mystery is at last revealed When man walked surface so far afield Moon dust and rocks blemished dead face Revealed reality cannot be erased Magical moon that rotates by our side Regret for all dreams its mystery died From far off distance presenting perfection Jagged facade smoothed no imperfection.
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