Jaded

anticipation
always exceeds reality
water flows downhill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sankey- Lewis Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Wonderful imagery I can see. excellent condensation.
Rodgers Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Thanks Iris
Dietrich Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 7:59 PM
excellent haiku!
Rodgers Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 2:05 PM
Thanks Andrea
Nance Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 8:03 AM
It's a bummer, but it's true, I like it :)
Rodgers Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 6:45 PM
Thanks Casarah, I may change the title to "jaded"
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