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Jaded

So badly. So desperately. So sure. So achingly. So ready. So complete. Jaded is what I was You were hurting. I was pleading. You were unsure. I was in pain You took the chance. I was tripping Jaded is what I was You looked alive. I felt we survived You started to shiver. I felt a quiver. You looked at me. I saw you. Jaded is what we were. I shook beside you. You begged for more. I gave it to you. You had pain no core. I watched you relax. You kissed my mind. Jaded we were not. Gone is what we got.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/25/2013 2:42:00 PM
Hello Iris, A nice little LATE and warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I noticed this is your first poem. -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/15/2013 3:28:00 PM
Not bad for being your first poem . I enjoyed the read. Welcome to PoetrySoup. If you like to write - keep writing. God bless. Lucilla
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