Jack's In Trouble

Jack's In Trouble
by Country Girl46
Jack and Jill went up the hill
To get a couple pails of water 
Jill bent down to tie her shoes
Jack looked down her halter

He smacked her in the ass
She turned around in a flash
Then smacked him in the face
Gave his neck a whiplash

Jack quickly ran down the hill
Jill made him feel like a fool 
But Jack did learn one thing 
What he did to Jill wasn't cool

Jill slowly walked home,
for she was really mad.
When she finally got home,
she went and told her dad.

Let's just say Jack never touched 
her ever again since that day
Jill he definitely stayed away
Felt very hurt and betrayed.





© Melanie . All rights reserved, 7 hours ago

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/19/2014 4:34:00 AM
I could not control my laughter. What a piece Melanie ! Poor Jack ass! )))::: rajat
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Country Girl48
Date: 10/19/2014 4:43:00 AM
sorry misspelled your name. this darn phone and automatic spelling
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Country Girl48
Date: 10/19/2014 4:42:00 AM
Rabat, you will have to be sure and read Jack and Jill's mistake and the three pigs
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