Marti Sutherland Poet Verse

Jackal

Join together in packs
Journey in Africa
Jaunt as prowling wolves and
jabber like little dogs
Jaws grip prey like a vice
Jugular bites will kill
Jolting Willis movie


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March 5th, 2017
Kim Merrymen Contest
Pleiades J

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Arthur Vaso March 12, 2017 at 6:08 PM Congrats on your win, liked this!

John Michaels March 11, 2017 at 5:02 AM Congratulations on your win. Nice write!

Agnes Krampe March 8, 2017 at 2:22 PM Congrats on your win, Marti.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2017 at 2:19 AM - Congratulations on your win, Marti :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser March 7, 2017 at 6:03 PM Great description of the Jackal, Marti! Congrats on your win :)

Kim Merryman March 7, 2017 at 5:25 PM A realistic depiction of these vicious animals! Congrats on your 3rd place win, Marti! Blessings, Kim

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2017 at 5:21 PM HOw are you, anyway, Marti. Long time no see!! gotta give you a seven too.

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2017 at 5:20 PM I love when people show all the different aspects of the word as you did here. I did that with one of mine and didn't score one time. haha. Anyway, I love this and I hope we both score with ours!!

Arthur Vaso March 5, 2017 at 7:35 PM I like I like!

Deborah Burch March 5, 2017 at 3:49 PM Nicely done Marty!! Best wishes for the contest!! Big Hugggs deb

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 1:14 PM - A great pleiades, Marti - Good luck in the contest - // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith March 5, 2017 at 11:41 AM If you look close enough you can see him lurking.

Nette Onclaud March 5, 2017 at 9:54 AM very nice take on the theme, marti.. i did one on the same subject; yours is better!..huggs

Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 9:07 AM Its not just jackals that hunt in packs and wear down their prey Marti - it also happens with man:-( great take on the theme:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx