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Jackal

Join together in packs Journey in Africa Jaunt as prowling wolves and jabber like little dogs Jaws grip prey like a vice Jugular bites will kill Jolting Willis movie JJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJJ March 5th, 2017 Kim Merrymen Contest Pleiades J

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/12/2017 6:08:00 PM

Congrats on your win, liked this!

John Michaels

Date: 3/11/2017 5:02:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Nice write!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/8/2017 2:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Marti.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2017 2:19:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Marti :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/7/2017 6:03:00 PM

Great description of the Jackal, Marti! Congrats on your win :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/7/2017 5:25:00 PM

A realistic depiction of these vicious animals! Congrats on your 3rd place win, Marti! Blessings, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2017 5:21:00 PM

HOw are you, anyway, Marti. Long time no see!! gotta give you a seven too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2017 5:20:00 PM

I love when people show all the different aspects of the word as you did here. I did that with one of mine and didn't score one time. haha. Anyway, I love this and I hope we both score with ours!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/5/2017 7:35:00 PM

I like I like!

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/5/2017 3:49:00 PM

Nicely done Marty!! Best wishes for the contest!! Big Hugggs deb

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2017 1:14:00 PM

- A great pleiades, Marti - Good luck in the contest - // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/5/2017 11:41:00 AM

If you look close enough you can see him lurking.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/5/2017 9:54:00 AM

very nice take on the theme, marti.. i did one on the same subject; yours is better!..huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 3/5/2017 9:07:00 AM

Its not just jackals that hunt in packs and wear down their prey Marti - it also happens with man:-( great take on the theme:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx