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Jack the Lad

His mother told him, watch out many a lass you will meet with some you will dally share a kiss or two, some you will bed but take care, for a lass that's too easy is not to be wed this advice he took to heart with many a lass he dallied most to his bed he took 'til one day he fell in love with a lass called Jill on bended knee he asked her will you please wed me oh no she said no never my mother warned me of studs like you she told me, bed them, don't wed them for a stud he will always be

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Date: 10/23/2015 8:53:00 PM
I LOVED this one, Shadow. hahaha. turn it around on THEM.... WHAM! bam, thank you sir!
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Date: 10/14/2015 10:02:00 AM
Ha ha, this was a fun twist!
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Date: 10/12/2015 1:55:00 PM
Hi Shadow: A great poem with a message. When my daughters were young. I always warned her about Studs.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/13/2015 7:48:00 PM
ty Ralph hugs
Date: 10/11/2015 5:09:00 AM
Soup Mail...thanks, Connie
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Date: 10/11/2015 5:05:00 AM
The ending of your poem left me with a big smile on my face Shadow. I loved this whimsical piece, with some good advice from Mom!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/13/2015 7:40:00 PM
ty Connie hugs
Date: 10/8/2015 3:59:00 PM
this is entertaining and wise, shadow..love your word play.. huggs
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 10/13/2015 7:39:00 PM
ty Nettie hugs

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