Jack of Spades

Jack of spades

(intro)  Fear not the dark queen skies
             The red crimson, tears of lies
             Fear not what you’ve been told
             For your soul has not been sold

(bridge)  You are free from all these chains
                 You alone make these restrains...

(ref) Take the leap into the unknown, to discover you’re not alone
         Take a glimpse inside the light, the super nova burning bright
         So unleash what you have learned and drink the chalice that you’ve yearned
         Succumb to all of your desires whilst your enemies transpire.

 (ref)  Now that you’re on the peak, no one will dare to speak
          Now your crown has been reforged, so lead well and don’t diverge
          As this oath you thou shall keep, never look back never retreat
         Keep these principals in your mind, as the stars are re aligned

(chorus)    From jack to king you have become
                  Deciding faiths with a flick of thumb
                  From jack to king you are reborn
                  Once a servant now adorned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/26/2016 4:26:00 PM
Nice to see this one again, Peter, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/14/2014 12:51:00 PM
Peter, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 6/13/2014 4:20:00 PM
Thanks for reading my simple verse ,and welcome to poetrysoup.This is an outstanding lyric poem..I can almost hear the music in the background.The poem has a beautiful message,It seems that after all the effort and work,the servant was crowned king,and all He needs is to always remember to reign as a king with the humbleness of a servant and all will be well.Tnks for sharing your verse- Charma
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Date: 6/13/2014 2:20:00 PM
Peter, welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you will find much to encourage you on this site as you share your poetry with others who love to write. Please visit my poems when you are able. Many writers will comment on your poetry if you do the same. Best wishes.
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Date: 6/13/2014 11:42:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Peter :) - I choose your first very well written lyric poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/13/2014 9:43:00 AM
Peter Paul, Patience,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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