Jack O Lantern

Don’t look into his soul on this all hallows eve,
for it takes just a glance to be gripped by his spell.
What starts out as a dream quickly spirals to hell
where your mind will see things you don’t want to believe.

As macabre and unearthly scenes interweave
you’ll be roused from your sleep by the clock’s baleful knell.
Don’t look into his soul on this all hallows eve,
for it takes just a glance to be gripped by his spell,

then entombed between worlds, death from life will not cleave,
in a state of decay you’ll eternally dwell.
If it happens to you, you'll have no voice to tell,
curs-ed eyes will see all, but your last breath will leave.
Don’t look into his soul on this all hallows eve.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Galua Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 12:10 AM
interesting narration...really...held my attention up to the end...^_^ v
Devonshire Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 4:56 PM
Wow, chilling legend, Sharon. It's a real mood setter for Halloween! Enjoyed being "scared to death" by the Jack O'Lantern. Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 11:27 PM
Ooh wee, shivers down my spine as I read this chilling beauty, Sharon! How are you?? Sorry been missing out on your writes recently-- but I had to give in and click on your name (I never know who entered my contest) I just scroll down really quick! super enjoyed this one and sure sets me on Halloween mode-- we are also thinking of stuff for school-- hope you're having a great weekend -- hugs to you :) -- nikko :)
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 10:08 AM
A pleasure to read your wonderful poetry today Sharon. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 6:25 PM
now I have to sleep with the covers over my head... what is that noise??
Roberts Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 6:21 PM
good scary one for Halloween, much enjoyed
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace