Jack and Jill

Endless throngs flocking unto, the theatres.... 
As spending hundreds in millions of dollars upon these 
Fantastical fairy tales ? Creation's tis all well although for truly 
A bit aside her escapism, surely does one's heart as spirit this turn
In good although, I have a much more brilliant Truth; far beyound ~
The crystal balls witches warlocks magic wands barbie dolls glittering dust
Intergalactic warfare something and or another makes myself, Smile.. 
When I consider their jovial journey which encompasses this innocence ?
Be it simple folly these children playing amid, life's meadows chasing time's 
Sunset as colourful clouds gather about her skies chimes of church bells resound.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/15/2013 8:34:00 PM
To chase time's sunset in the meadow and be that child again..Live the neverending fairy tale once again.Aw tnks for the journey john..Its nice travelling to a rainbow parh through.your verse once again...Going to my favs
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Date: 9/6/2013 6:12:00 PM
I agree, we spend way to much money on entertainment when right outside our door is a free place of enjoyment. I would rather spend my days outdoors under the sun and the moon. And, not in front of a computer, a television, or a video game. What is so realistic about that? Give me a life and fresh air any day! Excellent poetry, John!... Thank you for the sweet, kindly visit. Love, Kelly
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