Ivory Flakes

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01/19/25

Jasmine or Flakes

Fourth Place

Contest by Ink Empress

Snowfall in winter drizzling as ivory flakes. Chilled breeze blowing as if without break. Jack Frost jumping, busy to jog, even crazy in mist and fog. Floating in wind ivory flakes : Jack Frost walking on frozen lakes. Sitting on bough of birch tree White owl rotating neck. Ceaseless falling ivory flakes : Woodpecker didn't dare to peck. Declared snowy day : Watch shower of ivory flakes imprisoned at home. Enjoy hot milk shake. Lost love to reminisce looking at flying ivory flakes Leave fake hope, lost love not to remake. Under single quilt, sweetheart to take, wishing little warmth. Outside drizzling ivory flakes ! Spend night in mirth.

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