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I'Ve Scribbled This Song For You

I've Scribbled This Song For You... I'm wasting my days, my empty nights too, I should have held on, but I simply lost you, now I stagger along, wearing broken smiles, in between hell and you, there's a million miles, yes, I should have kept, you close to my skin, soaking your warmth, but you were laughing, at my foolish grin... now I'm all broken, and torn apart, but what the hell, I was always late, for the tolling of the bell, and now... now I stagger along, wearing broken smiles, in between hell and you, there's a million miles, so kiss me now like you once did, I'm tired of being so carefully hid, la laa laa la laa laa laa... (repeat to fade) :-)

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Date: 4/26/2013 7:13:00 PM
I have just read a couple of your posts and am ready to examine your work more carefully.... I like the feeling of your work. I'll be visiting later. Keep the coffee warm..... Jake
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Date: 4/30/2013 8:29:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jake! The coffee shall be warm, as as your words and sentiments! I appreciate your taking the time to read my scribbles, Jake! Stay well and warmest wishes..
Date: 4/25/2013 6:16:00 PM
read like a song <--- fix
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Date: 4/25/2013 6:15:00 PM
I like the foolish grin.... mostly of all I like the smiles you put on my faces while reading your poem, that sang like a song... :-) :-) right back at ya :-) ;-) ..Linda
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Date: 4/25/2013 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, ever so much, you're far too kind! :-)
Date: 4/24/2013 1:25:00 PM
Ow this is a very beautiful song..you got me singing along: : )..One for my.fav.Im going to miss reading these beauties..but in ten days time i ll be back..Well done`Charma
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Date: 4/24/2013 1:28:00 PM
Thanks, dear Charma! You're as kind as ever ... Have a wonderful time, and see you back on PS soon! Ciao, and thanks again :-)
Date: 4/24/2013 7:55:00 AM
This is beautiful <3
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Date: 4/24/2013 1:13:00 PM
Many thanks :-)
Date: 4/24/2013 7:30:00 AM
Do you write music as well, homeboy? I sure hope you do, because this piece definitely needs to be sung. I love your gentle side. :)
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:33:00 AM
Many, many thanks, fellow compatriot! Alas, if I had the voice I'd sing this, oh what the hell, I'm gonna sing it heartily anyways! Thanks again for your kind and warm words, as always. Ciao...

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