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I've Forgotten You

Whenever a soul mentions your name I can assure you, it doesn't spark a flame When you trail off like contrails in the sky You're so far gone; invisible in my mind's eye Arbitrium Divisa Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden Taken from Stanza 2 of my own poem, "I Do Not Miss You When You're Gone" Date submitted: 05/26/2019

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Date: 6/13/2019 6:15:00 PM
I think this is a great little verse you took from the longer one. What a poetic way to say "I do not miss you when you're gone!" Congrats on the winners' list.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/14/2019 1:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-)
Date: 6/13/2019 10:09:00 AM
Well penned, Edward. Congrats on your win.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 6/13/2019 2:11:00 PM
Thank you, Line:-) You should like my poem "I Do Not Miss You When You're Gone"
Date: 5/27/2019 9:50:00 PM
This is beautifully done. Proof that we can get over people who leave us.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/28/2019 5:26:00 PM
Thank you, Caren:-)

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