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I'Ve Been Bried Underground

I'VE. BEEN BRIED UNDERGOUND AND I CANT HEAR A SOUND SO MANY PEOPLE AROUND AND YET I HAVE NOT BEEN FOUND.LOOK AT ME CAN Y'ALL. SEE IAM LIVING IN A WORLDFUL OF HATEFULNESS.TALK TO ME DONT SCREAM AT ME .CRY WITH ME DONT LAUGH. AT ME.WALK EITH ME DONT LEAVE ME I FEEL ALL ALONE IN THE RAIN SO MUCH PAIN IT FEELS LIKE A TRAIN RUNING THRU MY VAINS I FEEL SO ASHAMED IN THE SAME OLD LANE NO FAME.I 'VE. BEEN BRIED UNDERGROUND AND I CANT HEAR A SOUND SO MANY PEOPLE AROUND AND I HAVE NOT YET BEEN FOUND

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2015 1:42:00 PM

- Hey Shaneeka :) - Welcome with your first poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2015 10:56:00 AM

Wonderful message to post on your first verse. Shaneeka, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Shaneeka Burks
Date: 9/22/2015 11:02:00 AM

Thank you

Skat A

Date: 9/22/2015 1:10:00 AM

This is deep, Shaneeka, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Shaneeka Burks
Date: 9/22/2015 8:50:00 AM

Hello how are u doing my name is shaneeka and i luv to sing write and make people smile i also luv to listen to to people when they need some1 to talk to....