Itty Bitty Sailor Girl

My mom used to say
 
  I swore like a sailor so-

       I joined the Navy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 20, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Hi, Amy, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 1:04 AM
Simply beautiful Amy,,, Congrats on ur great win !
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 12:40 AM
I wasn't expecting your ending and it made me laugh Amy. My daughter is an Army nurse. Congrats on your win with this cute Senryu!
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 11:50 PM
amy, I liked this one because my mom was a sailor (a Wave) in the 50's. She met my dad before he was put on the ship to Korea. Very cute one. Congrats in my contest.
Duncan Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 12:57 PM
cute ;)
Lamoureux Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 8:37 PM
Cute piece.
Callus Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 10:25 AM
Short, witty, enjoyable. :) // paul
Callus Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 6:11 AM
congrats on win, Amy :) // paul
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 8:26 AM
- Short and simple message, sailor girl Amy :) - Hope you had a nice time in the Navy !!! - Thanks for your kind visit on some of my poems - really appreciate your words. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 8:36 AM
:)))))
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 5:06 AM
Ha ha ha love it Amy - short, sweet, simple perfection! Hugs Jan x
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