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Itty Bitty Sailor Girl

My mom used to say I swore like a sailor so- I joined the Navy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 4/20/2014 12:43:00 PM
Hi, Amy, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. Happy Easter, luv LINDA
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Date: 4/19/2014 1:04:00 AM
Simply beautiful Amy,,, Congrats on ur great win !
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Date: 4/19/2014 12:40:00 AM
I wasn't expecting your ending and it made me laugh Amy. My daughter is an Army nurse. Congrats on your win with this cute Senryu!
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Date: 4/18/2014 11:50:00 PM
amy, I liked this one because my mom was a sailor (a Wave) in the 50's. She met my dad before he was put on the ship to Korea. Very cute one. Congrats in my contest.
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Date: 4/16/2014 12:57:00 PM
cute ;)
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Date: 4/14/2014 1:57:00 AM
Funny Senryu....... causing a smile and respect.. because joining the Navy isn't JUST a job... it means you put your life at stake.. while doing a meaningful job! Dutch greetings Elly
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Date: 4/10/2014 8:37:00 PM
Cute piece.
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Date: 4/6/2014 9:58:00 PM
Thank goodness she didn't say you swore like a man ;)
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Date: 4/6/2014 10:25:00 AM
Short, witty, enjoyable. :) // paul
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Date: 4/20/2014 6:11:00 AM
congrats on win, Amy :) // paul
Date: 4/6/2014 8:26:00 AM
- Short and simple message, sailor girl Amy :) - Hope you had a nice time in the Navy !!! - Thanks for your kind visit on some of my poems - really appreciate your words. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2014 8:36:00 AM
Date: 4/6/2014 5:06:00 AM
Ha ha ha love it Amy - short, sweet, simple perfection! Hugs Jan x
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