Itty Bitty Eyes

When moistened eyes of stone turn gray two marbles float as mirrors blur, like brittle glass, dreams gone astray when moistened eyes of stone turns gray. Through mist awash with night’s delay she breaks into a deep surrender. When moistened eyes of stone turn gray. two marbles float as mirrors blur. Third and Final Itty Bitty Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
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Richards Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 9:28 AM
There is more to "meet the eye" when reading this poem again and again. Congrats to you Nette !
A. Sharma Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 12:34 AM
As unique as always Nette,,,great poem n a great win,, Congrats !
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 12:01 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Andrea's contest Nette!
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 11:35 PM
Nette, I can always be sure to see a beauty when you are in my contest!! Wonderful imagery. Congrats for your win.
Horsman Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 10:49 AM
pity it is a final,, could read these for ever,,,
Smith Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 9:05 AM
Well written but so sad nette,,She surrenders after her dreams are lost....hugs Tim
Callus Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 8:49 AM
Beautifully expressed....technically a strong triolet; gl for contest. // paul
Callus Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 4:56 AM
Had faith in this one...congrats on fine win :) paul
Torres Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 8:30 AM
awesome... this is a wonderful poem , nette!! this will sure hit the winning spot in Andrea's contest!!,, :O)) Congrats in advance.. :O))
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