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Itty Bitty Eyes

When moistened eyes of stone turn gray two marbles float as mirrors blur, like brittle glass, dreams gone astray when moistened eyes of stone turns gray. Through mist awash with night’s delay she breaks into a deep surrender. When moistened eyes of stone turn gray. two marbles float as mirrors blur. Third and Final Itty Bitty Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 4/19/2014 9:28:00 AM
There is more to "meet the eye" when reading this poem again and again. Congrats to you Nette !
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Date: 4/19/2014 12:34:00 AM
As unique as always Nette,,,great poem n a great win,, Congrats !
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Date: 4/19/2014 12:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in Andrea's contest Nette!
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Date: 4/18/2014 11:35:00 PM
Nette, I can always be sure to see a beauty when you are in my contest!! Wonderful imagery. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 4/14/2014 10:49:00 AM
pity it is a final,, could read these for ever,,,
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Date: 4/14/2014 9:05:00 AM
Well written but so sad nette,,She surrenders after her dreams are lost....hugs Tim
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Date: 4/14/2014 8:49:00 AM
Beautifully expressed....technically a strong triolet; gl for contest. // paul
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Date: 4/20/2014 4:56:00 AM
Had faith in this one...congrats on fine win :) paul
Date: 4/14/2014 8:30:00 AM
awesome... this is a wonderful poem , nette!! this will sure hit the winning spot in Andrea's contest!!,, :O)) Congrats in advance.. :O))
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