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It's Your Life

The horizon is and will be The furthest distance of your sight. Between here and there is the quest The journey we call our life. Your unprepared unsuspecting Mind is unable to perceive Your challenges your task at hand And all you are meant to achieve. As long as you make yourself proud, Are the person you want to be. Care for those you bring to your life And your responsibilities. There is no judge or jury to Validate all you did and do. The only person qualified For you to answer to, is you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/21/2010 11:36:00 AM
Outstanding introspective and reflective look on life. Amazing lines! Thanks for your comment on my poem I enjoy a lot! Love, Susan
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Date: 6/21/2010 9:16:00 AM
Outstanding poem and I could totally relate. I really like the lines "your unprepared unsuspecting mind is unable to achieve". Thanks for your comment on my poem which I enjoy a lot too! Love, Susan
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Date: 5/29/2009 5:00:00 AM
Great rhyme! I love the flow of words but I think we will give account of our life to a supreme being God… it’s more than your life… Keep your poetry pens dancing to the drum beat of your dreams… great you! Leke
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