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Untameable emotion shoots through my veins like a white hot flame Twisting, contorting In the name of your being my eyes refuse to give in to the peace that night promises the pain makes me restless yet i can't forget how i feel so worthless so unloved it's untrue do I not deserve hapiness for being with you? Why is it that your soul insists on not fitting with mine it taunts and bruises the meaning unkind I swallow my sadness as it dives deep inside of me is our love not meant to be? Simple decisions too fragile to be made the truth lies present yet the future disguised why is it that i can't read your eyes?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/10/2011 9:20:00 PM
A beautiful poem, and best wishes for future writings! If you wish, I have one similar, "MY Emotions in Chaos"
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Abbey Haigh
Date: 8/15/2011 6:25:00 PM
Thankyou Patrick, your poems are lovely, I understand how you feel in them, good luck for writing more in the future x
Date: 8/10/2011 5:55:00 PM
Beautiful and dark poem hun x
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Abbey Haigh
Date: 8/15/2011 6:25:00 PM
Thanks Aimee, yours are wonderful too, I can relate x

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