It's Up To Us

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Written, April 21, 2025
For The Contest, “Write Thirteen Beautiful Lines”
Sponsor, Constance La France

Rondel Form- Not listed on PS
Usually 8 syllables per line
The poem consists of 13 lines in 3 stanzas
Rhyme scheme: ABba/abAB/abbaA
(uppercase letters are refrains)

“Each day drifts to our pile- pray, it's stamped with a smile.” _by Poet Each waking day arrives as new- it's up to us how well it ends. What lies between really depends on how we choose what we should do. Must think about the day's value; how every hour is used- portends each waking day arrives as new. It's up to us how well it ends. We're happy when the day stays true, accomplishing whatever lends- to peace of mind, our choice attends. Then face tomorrow with the view- each waking day arrives as new.

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