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Its Still Here

This buzzing sound i 
hear
Is it far or near?
Surely isn't musical 
I swing my hands in the 
air
Almost hitting myself
It seems to have 
disappeared 
No no its still here 
somewhere

This creepy sound I fear
Is it out there or in here?
Surely it isn't a night 
magical 
I'm forced into the cold 
harmattan air
Light in my hand I peer 
as far as I dare 
It seems to have 
disappeared
No no its still here 
somewhere
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Devnath  Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 10:48 AM
Is it not the buzzing of silence? Wonderful poem. Thanks for reading my write and for your kind comment. Loved always, bl
Kearley Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 12:04 AM
That buzzing sound you hear,I hear also...ha ha...Nice write.At least I know I'm not alone..
A  Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 5:26 PM
Nice featured poem~SKAT
Ikyembe Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 11:15 PM
Thanks!
A   Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Iveren Ikyembe, :-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself a lovely Sunday.... always & forever *LINDA
Ikyembe Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 11:14 PM
Thank you so much
Cavanaugh Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 2:25 PM
Welcome to the soup. "This buzzing sound I hear" the one still here somewhere. Is very familiar for me at times. I can identify with this poem.
Ikyembe Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 6:19 AM
Really glad to hear that. Thanks
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Kind of reminds me of mosquito filled nights in Northern Ontario. Welcome to the Soup. I hope you enjoy your time here.
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