Its Over Now.

It's Over Now
We had some problems
love was tough
we got in a fight 
and I said I had enough

You got mad and left
With whiskey on your breath
You hit someone head on
That's what lead to your sorrowful death

Everyone was at your funeral
wearing everything in black
I looked at your funeral in fault
walking off never looking back

Ever since you died that day
all I could do was meth
I still regret that argument
that brought you to your sudden death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 17, 2010 at 4:36 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kendraleigh. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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May 14, 2010 at 6:13 PM
A fine write on lost love
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May 14, 2010 at 4:24 PM
musta been a bad arguement
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