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Its Over

Who would've thought you would be the one to hurt me. After all this time, I've been here faithfully. The times we've had, both good and bad. Thru tears and laughter, I've always had your back. Blaming me is just you feeling guilty. For I'm the one who deserves to be happy. Playing with my heart is a big mistake. This is what you chose. I'll be going away. It's no longer a relationship between us two. Remember me later on, I've always loved you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/8/2018 12:28:00 PM
This poem is sincere, and heart-felt. Great job.
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Date: 3/8/2018 12:24:00 PM
I feel like I've just entered the wood shop. This is all so clear! Excellent! And love the continuation of the family pattern too.
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Date: 3/8/2018 12:19:00 PM
This poem is fraught with feeling and truth. Bravo!
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Date: 3/8/2018 12:16:00 PM
Your imagery, and sense of play make this poem amazingly fun to read!
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