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It's Over

It's crazy it's over, Drunk on pain no longer sober, The hammer fell and hit you hard, At the end of the deck but it's a bad card, How could you do that?how could you be so dumb? Felt so alive but now feel so numb, All you had was love for her, Thought it was getting better, You didn't know she felt broken, But she told you and now you have awoken, It hit you now your shaken, You didn't know the mistakes you were making, But now it's all over you feel so alone, You cry just looking at the phone, Put on a fake smile there watching, Mind your business keep on walking, Wish I had a 4 leaf clover, But it's to late it's all over.

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Date: 2/18/2017 4:44:00 AM
Hi, welcome to PoetrySoup with your first poem. This is so sad, well written, but painful! These things are so hard to write about... As I said, welcome here. Check out poems from other poets, leave a comment on their poem, that way they see you are there and in turn will leave a comment on YOUR poem :) Have a good stay here.
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