Jan Allison Poet Lyric

It's Over

You thought you’d make a fool of me
I was so blind but now I see
So now you’ve had your little joke
Guess I’m just warning other folk

You’d look at me with those bedroom eyes
But your tender words I now despise
You broke my heart through and through
Well honey I’ve got some news for you

Your designer clothes are now in rags
Packed up inside black plastic bags
Your cars been scratched and it’s got a dent
Your name has been taken off the rent

You love to flirt, but you’re a cheat
You’re just like a dog on heat
But I’m now aware of your little game
No man will hurt me ever again

Don’t get taken in by charming men
They use you and just start again
From now on I am in control
Hey man you’re just a big *******


24th July 2014

Contest 101 in a row ~10 sponsored by PD Linda:-)

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Charlie Smith August 9, 2016 at 6:29 AM How do you really feel Jan...congratulations Jan Allison August 9, 2016 at 5:09 PM I'm delighted to say its fictional Charlie lol so I feel great being able to showcase this old poem of mine:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A August 8, 2016 at 10:37 PM Hi, Jan, you miss me... :), Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "It's Over." always & forever ~LINDA~ Jan Allison August 9, 2016 at 4:03 AM Course I miss you lol:-) thanks for a great placement in the contest and the chance to showcase an older poem - I love this poem especially the final line lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter March 4, 2015 at 8:16 PM Jan, Whoever that guy is, I hope he knows he's been dismantled in exquisite style. Jan Allison March 5, 2015 at 3:53 AM Pure fiction write Paul lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2014 at 6:36 PM hey, there are a bunch of old poems being shown at the front of Soup and yours is one of them!! congrats for having this one shown! Jan Allison December 4, 2014 at 6:38 PM Thanks Andrea its being featured week - you are the first one to notice it! Hugs jan xxx

Lauren Smith November 17, 2014 at 6:19 PM Tell him Jan! : ) Jan Allison November 17, 2014 at 6:21 PM Purely a fiction write Lauren but I had fun penning it:-) hugs Jan xx

Brandon Harvey November 3, 2014 at 8:01 AM I truly enjoyed reading this . Awesome poem . Jan Allison November 17, 2014 at 6:20 PM Thanks Brandon - its purely a fictional write but I sure had fun writing it lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Valerie Staton September 4, 2014 at 7:43 PM Sounds like an excerpt from my life! Loved reading it! Good job! Jan Allison September 5, 2014 at 3:38 AM Glad you enjoyed it Valerie:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Country Girl48 August 20, 2014 at 11:17 AM I love this poem. I can so relate. Excellent poem! Jan Allison August 20, 2014 at 11:19 AM Thanks Melanie is a fictional write but I had fun writing it... especially the last line - thanks for your lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith July 29, 2014 at 8:18 PM In the top new poems of the month Jan Allison July 31, 2014 at 4:44 PM wow thanks Tim i didn't realise:-) Hugs as ever my friend. Jan xxxx

Tim Smith July 26, 2014 at 8:03 PM Congrats on the number 6 poem :) Jan Allison July 29, 2014 at 7:38 PM am confused... number 6? Hugs Jan xxx

Arlene Smith July 25, 2014 at 7:01 AM Ha!!!... Especially love the third stanza!... Tell it, sister!.. Lol.. Hugs.. Arlene Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 7:29 AM I had fun writing that one Arlene LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Phumlani Mthethwa July 25, 2014 at 6:27 AM The great thing about writing is that it provides a platform of learning, particularly about life and how to treat each other with love. Thank you for sharing Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 6:29 AM Thanks for dropping by with your kind comment. i only joined in February and am learning so much from some amazing poets:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer July 24, 2014 at 4:58 PM great poem! i was glad to read that it's fictional... Jan Allison July 24, 2014 at 4:59 PM Thanks for dropping by with your kind comment Ilene. it's strange what inspires us to write poems like this! Hugs jan xxx

Sara Kendrick July 24, 2014 at 3:26 PM Reads like someone who has experienced a bad relationship or knows someone else who has ...Interesting work that you have penned today..It is packed with emotion..Thanks for your visits to my place..Sara Jan Allison July 24, 2014 at 3:31 PM Thanks for dropping by with your comment Sara. hugs Jan

Frederic Parker July 24, 2014 at 11:50 AM My life's mantra, if my love can't hold you then nobody's love can Jan Allison July 24, 2014 at 12:18 PM Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment Frederic. Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 24, 2014 at 11:34 AM Great write Jan ! The way to go ,, cheaters to pay this time // Upma// Jan Allison July 24, 2014 at 12:17 PM Thanks for the comment Dr Sharma. Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance July 24, 2014 at 10:12 AM applause!! wow girl! you are a force! love this Jan, awesome! Casarah Nance July 24, 2014 at 7:47 PM Well I'm trying, I wish I had a fast connection, i'd be lighting up the soup like superman -er superwoman. xx Jan Allison July 24, 2014 at 10:19 AM Oh have so missed your comments Casarah - they are few and far between as it is! hugs Jan xxx

Pandita Sietesantos July 24, 2014 at 9:59 AM Hi Jan, I love this so much! Thanks for sharing the good advice about what we all have to do when a partner turns out to be bad news! BRAVO, my friend! Jan Allison July 24, 2014 at 10:11 AM I wouldnt advocate revenge like this Pandita LOL - i do remember reading of a golfer's girlfriend attacking his car with golf clubs - bet he was more cross about the bent clubs than the car:-) Hugs jan xxx

Faye Gibson July 24, 2014 at 9:44 AM Hey, Jan...written like you experienced it. I liked the vehement way you told him off. Great! Jan Allison July 24, 2014 at 9:47 AM Thanks Faye for the lovely comment - its purely a fictional write! Hugs Jan xxx

J. R. Corbin July 24, 2014 at 8:53 AM Yikes! Shades of Carrie Underwood! This is an excellent lyric (though you may need to make one change :). I really enjoyed this. I can almost hear the music. Jan Allison July 24, 2014 at 9:00 AM I would love to set it to music LOL Thanks for the lovely comment Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith July 24, 2014 at 8:09 AM Wow wow wow...wowsy wow wow. :) Jan all I can say is wow !!!..... ... Can you write one for my ex?......absolutely love it....hugs Tim Jan Allison July 24, 2014 at 8:12 AM She can have this one Tim with pleasure! Just change a few of the words my friend! Just need the music writing and we could have a massive hit here LOL Hugs as ever Jan xxx