It's Over

You thought you’d make a fool of me I was so blind but now I see So now you’ve had your little joke Guess I’m just warning other folk You’d look at me with those bedroom eyes But your tender words I now despise You broke my heart through and through Well honey I’ve got some news for you Your designer clothes are now in rags Packed up inside black plastic bags Your cars been scratched and it’s got a dent Your name has been taken off the rent You love to flirt, but you’re a cheat You’re just like a dog on heat But I’m now aware of your little game No man will hurt me ever again Don’t get taken in by charming men They use you and just start again From now on I am in control Hey man you’re just a big ******* 24th July 2014 Contest 101 in a row ~10 sponsored by PD Linda:-)

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Charlie Smith

Date: 8/9/2016 6:29:00 AM

How do you really feel Jan...congratulations

Jan Allison
Date: 8/9/2016 5:09:00 PM

I'm delighted to say its fictional Charlie lol so I feel great being able to showcase this old poem of mine:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/8/2016 10:37:00 PM

Hi, Jan, you miss me... :), Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "It's Over." always & forever ~LINDA~

Jan Allison
Date: 8/9/2016 4:03:00 AM

Course I miss you lol:-) thanks for a great placement in the contest and the chance to showcase an older poem - I love this poem especially the final line lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter

Date: 3/4/2015 8:16:00 PM

Jan, Whoever that guy is, I hope he knows he's been dismantled in exquisite style.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2015 3:53:00 AM

Pure fiction write Paul lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2014 6:36:00 PM

hey, there are a bunch of old poems being shown at the front of Soup and yours is one of them!! congrats for having this one shown!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/4/2014 6:38:00 PM

Thanks Andrea its being featured week - you are the first one to notice it! Hugs jan xxx

Lauren Smith

Date: 11/17/2014 6:19:00 PM

Tell him Jan! : )

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2014 6:21:00 PM

Purely a fiction write Lauren but I had fun penning it:-) hugs Jan xx

Brandon Harvey

Date: 11/3/2014 8:01:00 AM

I truly enjoyed reading this . Awesome poem .

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2014 6:20:00 PM

Thanks Brandon - its purely a fictional write but I sure had fun writing it lol :-) hugs Jan xx

Valerie Staton

Date: 9/4/2014 7:43:00 PM

Sounds like an excerpt from my life! Loved reading it! Good job!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/5/2014 3:38:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it Valerie:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Country Girl48

Date: 8/20/2014 11:17:00 AM

I love this poem. I can so relate. Excellent poem!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2014 11:19:00 AM

Thanks Melanie is a fictional write but I had fun writing it... especially the last line - thanks for your lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/29/2014 8:18:00 PM

In the top new poems of the month

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2014 4:44:00 PM

wow thanks Tim i didn't realise:-) Hugs as ever my friend. Jan xxxx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/26/2014 8:03:00 PM

Congrats on the number 6 poem :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/29/2014 7:38:00 PM

am confused... number 6? Hugs Jan xxx

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/25/2014 7:01:00 AM

Ha!!!... Especially love the third stanza!... Tell it, sister!.. Lol.. Hugs.. Arlene

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2014 7:29:00 AM

I had fun writing that one Arlene LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Phumlani Mthethwa

Date: 7/25/2014 6:27:00 AM

The great thing about writing is that it provides a platform of learning, particularly about life and how to treat each other with love. Thank you for sharing

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2014 6:29:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by with your kind comment. i only joined in February and am learning so much from some amazing poets:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/24/2014 4:58:00 PM

great poem! i was glad to read that it's fictional...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2014 4:59:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by with your kind comment Ilene. it's strange what inspires us to write poems like this! Hugs jan xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/24/2014 3:26:00 PM

Reads like someone who has experienced a bad relationship or knows someone else who has ...Interesting work that you have penned today..It is packed with emotion..Thanks for your visits to my place..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2014 3:31:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by with your comment Sara. hugs Jan

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/24/2014 11:50:00 AM

My life's mantra, if my love can't hold you then nobody's love can

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2014 12:18:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment Frederic. Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/24/2014 11:34:00 AM

Great write Jan ! The way to go ,, cheaters to pay this time // Upma//

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2014 12:17:00 PM

Thanks for the comment Dr Sharma. Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/24/2014 10:12:00 AM

applause!! wow girl! you are a force! love this Jan, awesome!

Casarah Nance
Date: 7/24/2014 7:47:00 PM

Well I'm trying, I wish I had a fast connection, i'd be lighting up the soup like superman -er superwoman. xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2014 10:19:00 AM

Oh have so missed your comments Casarah - they are few and far between as it is! hugs Jan xxx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/24/2014 9:59:00 AM

Hi Jan, I love this so much! Thanks for sharing the good advice about what we all have to do when a partner turns out to be bad news! BRAVO, my friend!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2014 10:11:00 AM

I wouldnt advocate revenge like this Pandita LOL - i do remember reading of a golfer's girlfriend attacking his car with golf clubs - bet he was more cross about the bent clubs than the car:-) Hugs jan xxx

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/24/2014 9:44:00 AM

Hey, Jan...written like you experienced it. I liked the vehement way you told him off. Great!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2014 9:47:00 AM

Thanks Faye for the lovely comment - its purely a fictional write! Hugs Jan xxx

J. R. Corbin

Date: 7/24/2014 8:53:00 AM

Yikes! Shades of Carrie Underwood! This is an excellent lyric (though you may need to make one change :). I really enjoyed this. I can almost hear the music.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2014 9:00:00 AM

I would love to set it to music LOL Thanks for the lovely comment Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/24/2014 8:09:00 AM

Wow wow wow...wowsy wow wow. :) Jan all I can say is wow !!!..... ... Can you write one for my ex?......absolutely love it....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2014 8:12:00 AM

She can have this one Tim with pleasure! Just change a few of the words my friend! Just need the music writing and we could have a massive hit here LOL Hugs as ever Jan xxx