Its Over

It's Over
Once in a lifetime there's
the perfect man
his head up high but
he hides what's in his hands

Gulits, lies, and cheating
of course
I trace it all down to
the main source

The scared man that
use to stand up so tall
caught in his web of lies
he looks pretty small

As his life moves slower
and slower
it finally speeds up to
find out we're over.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 8:14 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Murphy Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 10:36 AM
letting go is the hardest part as he moves slower you have to move faster and leave him behind enjoy your life don't let anyone hold you back take care and good luck and welcome to poetry soup faleshia
Kendrick Avatar
April 6, 2010 at 8:58 AM
Sad to get involved with someone without good character. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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April 6, 2010 at 4:55 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Marissa. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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