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Its Over

It's Over Once in a lifetime there's the perfect man his head up high but he hides what's in his hands Gulits, lies, and cheating of course I trace it all down to the main source The scared man that use to stand up so tall caught in his web of lies he looks pretty small As his life moves slower and slower it finally speeds up to find out we're over.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/6/2010 8:14:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/6/2010 10:36:00 AM
letting go is the hardest part as he moves slower you have to move faster and leave him behind enjoy your life don't let anyone hold you back take care and good luck and welcome to poetry soup faleshia
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Date: 4/6/2010 8:58:00 AM
Sad to get involved with someone without good character. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/6/2010 4:55:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Marissa. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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