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For what is love  but the feeling of belonging that brings pleasure and comfort, to those of us that  have been blessed with that special gift. I hope we all may  be that lucky.

For the lark she sings in her morning song,
That brightens up my day.
The pitter patter of tiny drops,
Clouds fill the sky with grey.

The dampened ground, that familiar smell,
Now quenched refreshed anew.
Brings forth forgotten memories,
Of a time that I once new.

Like grains of sand they ebb and flow,
Those minutes of the day.
In lines of endless moments,
That brought forth that child at play.

For is this just like déjà vu
For some time I’ve been alone.
Now standing here now humble,
To all these things I’ve known.

With gentle face a youthful pose,
As we danced the night away,
A tender touch a knowing gaze,
No need for words to say.

For what is love but a feeling?
As hearts melt into one.
With the blessings of good fortune,
 Now Care free and full of fun.

For they say that hopes eternal,
And all things come to he who waits.
Or is that for other people,
For nothing seems that straight.

Given in reflected thought,
To those oh so special years.
Brought back in just a heart beat,
I wipe away the tears.

© N windle

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/21/2015 1:09:00 AM
Awesome :)
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Date: 10/13/2015 6:06:00 PM
Its a good write
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Date: 10/12/2015 10:22:00 AM
Nice flow. Nicely done.
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Date: 10/11/2015 10:39:00 AM
that familiar smell----Brings forth forgotten memories---just like déjà vu---things come to he who waits--the tears !!! nice... thank you for sharing..
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Date: 10/11/2015 8:09:00 AM
Beautiful poem. i have gon thru its depth. Anisha Dutta
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Date: 10/10/2015 2:59:00 PM
All three of you poems are captivating. You write well. Welcome!
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Date: 10/10/2015 9:52:00 AM
lovely read :) 7
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Date: 10/9/2015 9:28:00 PM
Wonderful, I just loved your poem. It's perfect.
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Date: 10/9/2015 3:58:00 PM
For they say that hopes eternal I ALWAYS HOPE FOR THE BEST BEAUTIFUL READ ~PHATT
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Date: 10/9/2015 12:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem read from you. The last four lines are marvelous. 7 i feel. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 10/9/2015 5:25:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. Worthy of being included with the Romantic era i.e. Wordsworth, Blake, Coleridge etc. Wonderful use of couplets. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
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Date: 10/9/2015 1:19:00 AM
This is very well written and the rhyming is perfect it has a nice flow with plenty of feeling and thought put into it.
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Date: 10/8/2015 8:49:00 PM
Beautiful !
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Date: 10/8/2015 6:43:00 PM
Poetry Team Soup recommended the readings of your poetry. I am delighted...this is lovely....and Congratulations you have so many reads on all your poems......
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Date: 10/8/2015 5:53:00 PM
YOU WRITE VERY NICELY. A MOVING READ.
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Date: 10/8/2015 4:37:00 PM
A beautiful reflection of yore and I really enjoyed your other poetry.Congrats on poem of the day.
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Date: 8/22/2014 5:55:00 AM
Memories can delight or bring sadness or sometimes both at the same time..I enjoyed reading your work today..I am glad that I chose this one today.Sara
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Date: 8/19/2014 6:46:00 PM
Congrats on Poem of the Day. Very lovely piece. I enjoyed the simplicity in it. Take care, Jess :)
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Date: 8/19/2014 2:06:00 PM
oops, forgot the 7...here ya' go, you earned one thousand 7's or more!!!!!
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Date: 8/19/2014 2:05:00 PM
yet another spectacular choice for "Poem of the Day" Whoever chooses these really has an eye for good poetry! Your poem here is something wonderful! WOW! "HEARTS melt into One" WHAT is love but a feeling"---Excellent lines poet, excellent!~JSL 7rate
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Date: 8/19/2014 12:33:00 PM
Nice Nicholas... Congratulations on being chosen as poem of the day. Verlena
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Date: 8/19/2014 11:01:00 AM
This is a fave poem for me-love the flow of it with all its imagery. Congrats!:-)Christine
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Date: 8/19/2014 9:59:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being chosen to be POD!!!
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Date: 8/19/2014 6:56:00 AM
dropping back with my congratulations so so so good to see this as poem of the day! Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/19/2014 6:46:00 AM
Congrats on being the Poem of the Day. Well done :)
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