It's Only Me - Let Me Unwind

Inside, outside...
Doesn't matter where I hide 
Felling sorry for those who've died 
Can't you hear me...when I have cried 

In bed, In fed... 
Rather eat outside instead 
Get those feelings out of my head 
Isn't that...what mother said
 
Head welt, I've knelt... 
Don't you know what I've been dealt 
I'm sure your heart would surely melt 
If you've felt...what I have felt 

Don't mind, my mind...
It's not so easy for you to find 
When you all are in the blind 
It's only me...let me unwind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Proxenos Avatar
July 3, 2019 at 2:37 PM
This is such fun - love the way you penned and rhymed it and the words you chose make it an awesome poem Charlie! Hugs, Jennifer.
Romios Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 7:46 AM
Like this one, Charles. Unwinding is crucial. PANAGIOTA
Rodrigues Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 7:43 PM
Well said in a lovely lyrical way.
Horsman Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 4:26 PM
Poetry is a great way to unwind, Charlie, and i've just read an awesome one.
Laurie Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 1:49 AM
G'day Charles … we all need these minutes to unwind our addled brains at times. There appears to be so much thrown at us these days - thank you Charles - Lindsay
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June 29, 2019 at 9:08 PM
I like this because of the introspection in here and the heart-felt emotions Charles. Venting is always a great poem if you ask me!
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