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Its Nothing But the End

you tare me down
you make me cry
you think its alright
as you just walk on by
yah you say you need time
but maybe the time has just ran out
maybe its over
maybe its done 
maybe its the end of everything
that we ever was.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/16/2010 7:45:00 AM
wow i really hope thats not the end but who ever you are writing to needs to stop and think of you when they say they need time because you need something too right!?! greatpoem and the ending line just emphasizes the way heart break feels, it feels like you are going to die! i loved it and am happy to be your first comment on it.
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