Timothy Mcguire Poet Rhyme

Its My Couch

I pissed my dog off today
He wouldn't listen to what I had to say
He didn't have to be such a grouch
I just wanted him off my couch

Why is he so mad, I didn't even holler 
I just pulled on his collar
He was being such a jerk and wanted to fight
Snarled and growled and gave me a bite

We had one hell of a brawl
Across the floor and half way up the wall
I don't think I can take it anymore
He's on my couch while I'm sleeping on the floor!

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Line Gauthier January 25, 2022 at 8:39 PM Adorable poem, Timothy. Totally charming ~ last line - small suggestion to replace 'and' with 'while'. Timothy Mcguire January 25, 2022 at 9:47 PM Done, Thank you! :) Timothy Mcguire January 25, 2022 at 9:45 PM Thanks, I will make that change too!

Lindsay Laurie January 25, 2022 at 4:48 PM Hello Timothy ... once a dog comes indoors, the house becomes a kennel and you drop in the pecking order. Best of luck Timothy - Lindsay Timothy Mcguire January 25, 2022 at 9:48 PM Thanks Lindsay, Sleep with dogs, wake up with fleas!

Kelly Deschler January 25, 2022 at 10:47 AM I have the same problem with my cat sometimes, but she usually gives in and shares "her spot" with me ... Keep up the good writing, Timothy. I enjoyed reading your work this afternoon! Timothy Mcguire January 25, 2022 at 2:20 PM Thank you so much Kelly! Ill be checking your work out!

Gershon Wolf January 18, 2022 at 9:43 PM The whole world has gone to the dogs, as you have no doubt found out! :) gw Timothy Mcguire January 21, 2022 at 2:34 PM So true Gershon.….

John Lawless January 18, 2022 at 8:28 AM I guess we know who's top dog now... Timothy Mcguire January 18, 2022 at 3:41 PM You got that right!