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It's My Birthday, It Is Your Birthday

It’s My Birthday It’s my birthday… I look out the window there is no one for me owe so, owe so lonely poor me . It’s my birthday… you surprise me, with a Barber-Q grill with a cooler that chills with a grin we show white grills. Happy Birthday… it’s my Birthday I am still waiting, it is almost the end of my the day, just waiting on you to wish me a happy birthday which, well make my day. It’s my birthday…you do not remember that day, can we go out for we can remember that day? It’s my birthday… I can share it or alone, some share it with a twin, or with a friend and the ones who stay to the ends like a good friend. It my birthday… its looks like another day to me I just need someone or something to comfort with me a room full of women and with hand full men, a juice in cup, juice in glass, with a sweet lady and grill on cut grass that may make every day feel like my birthday, with a touch of class. It’s your birthday… it’s your birthday you should all-ways win on your birthday, if do not have a mate you sneak and go on second party date form those who may player hate. Happy Birthday, Happy Birthday! it comes and go, I see you come through, looking out my window with a hand full company that is what a party really should need, yes it’s sweet, sweet with music and sweet with treats or it must be the money, or food, or brinks, or just me. Poetry 7/7/12 by author Keith Kadell

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Date: 12/31/2012 12:08:00 PM
great write,lovely done Keith
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Date: 10/2/2012 1:46:00 PM
KEITH, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD
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Date: 10/3/2012 11:53:00 AM
its your birthday :)
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Keith Relf
Date: 10/3/2012 11:50:00 AM
thank you
Date: 10/1/2012 9:54:00 PM
Very nice tribute to Debbie. Well done. Lee
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Keith Relf
Date: 10/3/2012 11:51:00 AM
thank you
Date: 10/1/2012 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Keith. Love, Carol
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Keith Relf
Date: 10/3/2012 11:52:00 AM
thank you ... its your birthday :)
Date: 9/30/2012 10:56:00 PM
BIG CONGRATULATIONS KEITH FOR WINNING 1ST PLACE ON DEBBIE’S CONTEST. HAVE A BLESSED DAY ALWAYS!! (^_^)
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Keith Relf
Date: 10/3/2012 11:56:00 AM
thank you ... its your birthday :)
Date: 9/30/2012 1:57:00 PM
Big congrats Pepper xx
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Keith Relf
Date: 10/3/2012 11:52:00 AM
thank you ... its your birthday :)
Date: 9/30/2012 12:39:00 PM
Thank you from the bottom of me heart for celebrating with me. Light & Love
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Date: 10/3/2012 11:52:00 AM
thank you ... its your birthday :)
Date: 7/22/2012 3:57:00 PM
I have birthday tomorrow 23.07.2012....surprise me....:) - Hope you have a good birthday Keith.- Moving written poem, well done.- oxox hugggs Anne-Lise
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Keith Relf
Date: 7/23/2012 1:05:00 PM
thank you and happy birthday
Date: 7/20/2012 10:13:00 AM
Good Writing!!!
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Keith Relf
Date: 7/22/2012 3:54:00 PM
thanks
Date: 7/9/2012 5:14:00 PM
great write Keith,sound like its gonna be a party up in ere
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Keith Relf
Date: 7/9/2012 5:25:00 PM
thanks lol... party party :D

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