Its My Birthday Every Day

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Its my birthday every day just because I awoke to see another day 
a new breath an extra hour beneath my belt, I am God's living ray 

Defying all odds I am still here stumping the experts with my drill  
dancing in the sunlight like a dervish mendicant ascetic, no pills; 

I remember being six and blowing out the candles on my frosty cake 
mamma asked me sweetly to make a wish before the first snowflake 

I wished to live forever so I could find the secret of a well lit firefly 
and summer after summer I watched them as they lit up the sky 

It is my birthday today, every hour succinct to the next I like it this way 
twirling like a wild baton in a parade I bang my drum and I sing all day 

A new breath an extra hour beneath my belt, I am God's special girl 
a Mystic soul that refuses to lay down and die, while the stars unfurl 

I'll lay on the freshly mowed lawn and watch the stars shine from on high,  
while I recall mamma's birthday cake and the fireflies that once lit up the sky.

Date: April 22, 2021 
Sponsor Name: Charlotte Puddifoot 
Contest Name: Open Poetry 3

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/29/2021 6:23:00 PM
"A new breath..." Profound in its entirety. Each new day, birthday every day. Yes, yes, and yes. To be aware of this, gratitude rains supreme.
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Date: 4/22/2021 3:34:00 PM
such a lovely uplifting poem and yeah celebrate every day my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/22/2021 12:03:00 PM
Plus you are still wearing your birthday suit! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 4/22/2021 8:51:00 AM
Breath of pure joy in every verse my friend. Celebrate your day (every day) and live forever, Vienna!
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Date: 4/22/2021 7:19:00 AM
Humanity needs to be reminded that every single day is a birthday! Is a life granted to us.. a blessing for which we are to be grateful to God.. Mystic Rose, you are spreading a genuine loving caring spirit in your wonderful poetry! Great spiritual message! A poetry of great worth! Love and hugs.
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Date: 4/22/2021 6:26:00 AM
Wow ~ beautiful poem ~ such passion. A lovely read. Most uplifting. Thank you.
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