Notes About The Poem

  9/4/2025

Its Most Artistic Form

A blissful, calm day echoes.
A warmth of a kiss it yields.
Atop trees and fertile fields
As far as the sky meets.

Favor grin honor its joyfulness
Of that felt by summer’s rays
On nature’s medium maze
Of color spray in sway, in gay play.

Keep, long moment narrative open
To the comfort landscape painting.
The finished airbrushed scene, reigning
By the hands and heart of the sun.

Pinwheel quivers rapidly, savoring time.
A breath airborne towards space
Across limbs with misplaced grace,
Expressing seconds of melodious chime.

  9/4/2025
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September 17, 2025 at 8:36 AM
Congrats on your win Eve, Very nicely penned
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