Its Just a Number....So Why Care?...Dont...

Like chalk on a sidewalk we stand out for a moment
Then we are washed away by the rain

Fake.

Love.

Hurt.

Pain.

Everything you try to be to fit in with that crowd you wanna be in
But then the truth comes out and everyone knows you're a fake

Lies.

Ages.

Sadness.

Scared.


The one you want and need to be with cause you love and feel different
But the age stops everyone when its just a number,But I wanna be you forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
November 16, 2009 at 12:32 PM
A solid job and true statement
Loveless Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 10:49 AM
Sweet Cheeekkkssss!!!!!! Ohmigawwwd!! I Loveee This Lexi Babee!!! All Of It. Jeeze If Only I Could.....Ohmigod...lmao...okay well i had coffie and its still pumping through my system so yeh but i seriously still friggin love this peice!!! miss you more xoxo ~Booboo
Pickett Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 1:58 PM
I like the rhythm this write. Wonderfully expressive, awesome structure.....:JP]
Chamma Avatar
August 27, 2009 at 1:25 PM
Great poem...I love it..the first two lines are fantastic... Always, Farah
Holden Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 1:51 PM
very interesting subject good write
Guzzi Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 1:16 PM
It's Just a Number...would be a good title or Too Many One word answers? Light & Love
Loveless Avatar
May 15, 2009 at 9:03 AM
We Numbers Written By Chalk, Washed Away By The Rain. <33 Me PS I love this its amazing ^^
Bird Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 8:55 PM
This is a very interesting write, and I am sure we all felt like the outcast at some point in our lives, and once you love yourself so will everyone else. Love the creative structure to this Lexi, good one you!
Knowles Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 7:24 PM
i like the structure of the poem and the message. no better person to be than yourself.
Loving Iii Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 1:44 PM
just be your self. time will come when months will feel like weeks. and years will pass like months. the older you get the faster time moves. enjoy your youth you have a very short time left. then after that the work begins. john
Peranteau Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 10:29 AM
Levi,..this is a touching write,..I'm sure you will come up with a creative title, the way you write! ty for your comment.......james
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May 14, 2009 at 9:42 AM
i can relate to this poem a lot.! very motivating. -Reality
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