Danny Derden Poet Rhyme

It’s Jane’s Lane

On a train
Heard man splain
Female brain
Such a strain
Long refrain
Total pain
Real cross grain
Just a stain

Up stood Jane
Made it plain
Straight explain
To contain
His campaign
In wrong vein
Not his lane
Just insane

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Duke Beaufort September 22, 2025 at 4:29 AM Danny, how often have we overheard or listened to a crock of something putrid? There's a kind way to respond to it, but it's hard to change people's minds. Not so easy at all. Smiles!! Danny Derden September 22, 2025 at 1:57 PM Most times probably best to ignore it (I have to tell myself that a LOT...I'm not really the ignoring type)...but sometimes it is nice to see "the little guy" push back...not that women are "little guys" but they often get treated that way.

sara Etgen-Baker September 21, 2025 at 5:38 PM short lines that rhymed but still conveyed a powerful message. Well done, Danny. Danny Derden September 22, 2025 at 1:56 PM Thank you. Amtrak is an interesting ride.