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It’s Jane’s Lane

On a train
Heard man splain
Female brain
Such a strain
Long refrain
Total pain
Real cross grain
Just a stain

Up stood Jane
Made it plain
Straight explain
To contain
His campaign
In wrong vein
Not his lane
Just insane

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Duke Beaufort Date: 9/22/2025 4:29:00 AM Danny, how often have we overheard or listened to a crock of something putrid? There's a kind way to respond to it, but it's hard to change people's minds. Not so easy at all. Smiles!! Login to Reply Danny Derden Date: 9/22/2025 1:57:00 PM Most times probably best to ignore it (I have to tell myself that a LOT...I'm not really the ignoring type)...but sometimes it is nice to see "the little guy" push back...not that women are "little guys" but they often get treated that way.

Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 9/21/2025 5:38:00 PM short lines that rhymed but still conveyed a powerful message. Well done, Danny. Login to Reply Danny Derden Date: 9/22/2025 1:56:00 PM Thank you. Amtrak is an interesting ride.