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Its In Her Kiss 74

He released the comb, let her golden hair fall.
Her blue eyes sparkled, they really did enthral.
The sweetness of her kiss was still on his lips. 
He played with a curl at the curve of her hips.
They were just two ships passing in the night.
For both, it felt so right, as love began to ignite.
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2023 at 3:12 PM
Such a great line: He played with a curl at the curve of her hips.
Volumes Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 9:20 AM
LOL glad you liked it Kim. Thanx for your comment. Sorry for the delay in response.
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