Its Happening Everywhere

she had enough curiosity to kill a thousand cats but not about sex

she awoke to him on top of her AGAIN then a quick blow to the head

she had been stricken temporarily dumb

suddenly she had a sharp penetrating eruption of rage and hatred and alien that belonged in 
as science fiction movie

on a deep instincual level he knew what was coming next

his conscious mind could not-or would not-put a name on it but his subconscious knew what 
it was 

he fled out the door in a blind-panic as wide-eyed and spooked as a dumb animal reacting to 
headlights

she had a moment of vulnerability as the door swung shut behind him

her exquistely shaped and hormoniously related features bespoke sensitivity and refinement
opposite of a parody of seduction

she felt like she was attacked by a pack of rats

was she able to go after her attacker this time the fifth time the last time she knew who he 
was and where he lived

she quietly moved around his bed as he drooled and dreamed and put the knife to his throat
then slapped him in the face

he began pleading and apologyzing squrrying and ceaselessly crying in what almost sounded 
like a guttural foreign language

finally she made her point and left him to drown in his guilt but as soon as she closed the 
door she heard a "BANG" 

he took his own life he ended their pain all she could do was scream"NO DAD!"

TO MANY CHILDREN ARE ABUSED BY RELATIVES AND WE IGNORE THE SIGNS
THESE ARE THE ONES WE LOVE WE MUST OPEN OUR EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/25/2009 4:35:00 PM
A subject that needs publicity. I work with kids and sometimes need to deal with my own anger at the perpetrator. Kids should never go through this and the A--holes who turn their heads and look the other way are just as guilty. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 5/25/2009 2:32:00 PM
Versy scary write, but its true! Awesome message hermana! Eduardo
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Date: 5/25/2009 11:28:00 AM
Mail for the soldier.
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Date: 5/25/2009 11:24:00 AM
Wow...well this just shook my heart up...I am a parent and this really blew my mind up...I think this could be a short story if you developed it more..I love the story telling aspect of your writing. Your characters are not some lifeless entities just occupying space in a story..they are meaningful and filled with purpose..strong writing.
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